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Open Poetry #20

Moon Beyond The Waters Edge

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-09 01:01 PM

Moon Beyond The Waters Edge

I wake
from dreams
to surf your shore
touching
a shadows reflection
to wanting more
you beckon me
to travel the current
of your tide
unleashed,
you are
a waves guide
I follow steps
of a surging
moons dance
the current
movement in
a swelling romance
simple motion
of rise, ripple,
and roll
soul once separated
and half
now whole
beyond
the waters edge
is the moon
and I
just sigh
within its spoon

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-06-09 01:26 PM

Very beautiful.
Sandra

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-06-09 01:27 PM

I really enjoyed this, the imagery let me see everything in my head. thx

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-09 05:15 PM

It was cute...I liked it very much so.
-neala

Empress
New Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 4
AZ, USA

4 posted 2002-06-09 05:19 PM

Excellent write! I truly enjoyed the flow of this poem, line after line. Your rhyme was great without seeming forced, and with the structure of the poem, the rhyme was even subtle.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-06-09 10:48 PM

OneSlickLady~
Delicately lovely~
(Like the pic)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-06-10 04:29 PM

soul once separated
and half
now whole
beyond
the waters edge

I've always wondered if the moon needed the water. . . perhaps it is so. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2002-06-16 05:57 PM

Your work is always good to come back to a few days later for more reflection. . . and this is no exception.
A romance indeed!

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