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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-06-09 07:40 AM


Dappled Absurd

It follows me each morning born
Then runs ahead till it is shorn.
Disappears the time of noon
Sprints ahead to meet the moon

It starts the day the smallest small
And grows into the tallest tall
Although it cannot speak a word
It motions me until it’s heard.

It has no substance you can touch
It’s just a see thought gray as such.
But when I’m sad with what I do
It’s always there a second you.

It pictures me and makes me laugh
Simply with it’s choreograph
Exaggerates my every move
Till there is nothing more to prove

Pure nonsense is these dappled words
But it is fun to be absurd.



© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-09 07:48 AM



Oh the smiles you leave 'pon my face
a bit of morning's poetic embrace
for my poems are but your absurd
still, I treasure every word...

Good great Sunday Morning, Sy...

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2 posted 2002-06-09 08:00 AM


Morning Sy,
Enjoyed my early Sunday read...
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-06-09 08:00 AM


Sunshine,
And good morning to you love.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-06-09 08:02 AM


Enchantress,
And a wonderful morning to you my dear.

ethome
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5 posted 2002-06-09 08:20 AM


Not so absurd at all I enjoyed the dappled delights....Good Sunday morning Sy!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-06-09 08:32 AM


ethome,
Glad you liked and a very good morning to you

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7 posted 2002-06-09 08:39 AM


It has no substance you can touch
It's just a see thought gray as such.
But when I'm sad with what I do
It's always there a second you.

It pictures me and makes me laugh
Simply with it's choreograph

Exaggerates my every move
Till there is nothing more to prove

Pure nonsense is these dappled words
But it is fun to be absurd.
============================


What some say will seem absurd ...
Another says 'tis the sweetest ever heard
Like the soprano song of morn's first bird ...
Each day, a little miracle occurred

For me, rhyme and verse are preferred ...
never deterred ... I hang on your every word.



*winkieiwinkie*
nothing you say is absurd me sweet Stinky


When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations
When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence

JFK

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8 posted 2002-06-09 09:11 AM


I enjoy a little absurdity, especially on Sunday mornings. Thanks for the wake up call.
Enjoy what remains of your weekend. Monday the real absurdity begins.

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9 posted 2002-06-09 09:17 AM


damn...she's RIGHT..IT'S SUNDAY...izzit still okay to dapple m'self?


oh.

TOO LATE!!!!

tip o the mug t'ya!

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-06-09 09:32 AM


Dear Tink,
You are a column of my ivy tower.
And certainly alot of the power.
You are the wind under my wings
And many other magic things.
I think it no accident we met
And have many meeting still and yet
I feel remorse an aching loss
I'm jealous of my mind of course.
And so is Randy. Winkiewinkie Stinky.


Bags123,
Glad you enjoyed and your right about Monday

Serenity,
And to you, thank you dear.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-09-2002 01:04 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-06-09 06:43 PM


Seymour my dearest friend This is incredible writing, again you manage to spin words into threads of light that refract and dance in delicate hues of sunshine within. Your writing shines as no other does.

And what a brilliant jewel this is, utterly utterly perfect the rhythm in this is utterly divine, I love it when you write like this. Truly exquisite, the smile I have is big and golden

I love your absurd play on theme
The twist and spiral of poet dream
No other writer can do this
Spin wordy magic in poet’s bliss
You write the words that speak to me
That fills me with poet’s fantasy
Like Alice in her wonderland
I’m held captive by your poet’s hand

Your writing spins threads of delight
That sends me spiralling into night
A touch of your pen and I’m bound
Without so much as a single sound
You breathe your poet breath on me
And I’m gone where there’s a mystery
Until the day that you don’t write
I’ll be caught in your poetic light

Did you miss me yesterday? Mmmm like a hole in the head, well I missed you, truly I did


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-06-09 06:52 PM


Marsha,
You are really spoiling me.
And I did miss you.

Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-06-09 06:56 PM


Oh this is so very excellent, Sy...
I have been trying to write a poem about my shadow for a couple of weeks now...and I just can't seem to get it right...
but you have hit the nail right on the head with this one...
I love your descriptions

It has no substance you can touch
It’s just a see thought gray as such.
But when I’m sad with what I do
It’s always there a second you

Oh how I wish I had written this....
You are a genius, Sy...

~ shadowy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2002-06-09 07:56 PM


Lyra,
And you are a delight with your reply.   

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15 posted 2002-06-09 09:17 PM


Ok,  I give...

Where do you come up with all of these little
jewels...???

Excellent...errrr,  did I see the name
Stinky?

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-06-09 10:13 PM


Magnus,
Thank you for the nice reply and yes JM does call me Stinky.

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17 posted 2002-06-09 10:39 PM


Seymour~
You are my favorite flavor of dapple~
This is just a wonderful write~
All of your work is such a pleasure to read aloud~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2002-06-10 07:19 AM


Marge,
Aand you are my favorite

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19 posted 2002-06-10 11:37 AM


I love it when you merge whimsy and wisdom... for you do it in such delightful ways. *S* Excellent work!
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2002-06-10 04:10 PM


Suthern,
your a super excellent fan.

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21 posted 2008-01-12 01:34 AM


I was just missing your dappled words Sy, and hope you are busy riding your dragon.
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