Open Poetry #20 |
Dappled Absurd |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dappled Absurd It follows me each morning born Then runs ahead till it is shorn. Disappears the time of noon Sprints ahead to meet the moon It starts the day the smallest small And grows into the tallest tall Although it cannot speak a word It motions me until it’s heard. It has no substance you can touch It’s just a see thought gray as such. But when I’m sad with what I do It’s always there a second you. It pictures me and makes me laugh Simply with it’s choreograph Exaggerates my every move Till there is nothing more to prove Pure nonsense is these dappled words But it is fun to be absurd. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh the smiles you leave 'pon my face a bit of morning's poetic embrace for my poems are but your absurd still, I treasure every word... Good great Sunday Morning, Sy... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy, Enjoyed my early Sunday read... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And good morning to you love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, And a wonderful morning to you my dear. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Not so absurd at all I enjoyed the dappled delights....Good Sunday morning Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome, Glad you liked and a very good morning to you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It has no substance you can touch It's just a see thought gray as such. But when I'm sad with what I do It's always there a second you. It pictures me and makes me laugh Simply with it's choreograph Exaggerates my every move Till there is nothing more to prove Pure nonsense is these dappled words But it is fun to be absurd. ============================ What some say will seem absurd ... Another says 'tis the sweetest ever heard Like the soprano song of morn's first bird ... Each day, a little miracle occurred For me, rhyme and verse are preferred ... never deterred ... I hang on your every word. *winkieiwinkie* nothing you say is absurd me sweet Stinky When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I enjoy a little absurdity, especially on Sunday mornings. Thanks for the wake up call. Enjoy what remains of your weekend. Monday the real absurdity begins. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
damn...she's RIGHT..IT'S SUNDAY...izzit still okay to dapple m'self? oh. TOO LATE!!!! tip o the mug t'ya! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Tink, You are a column of my ivy tower. And certainly alot of the power. You are the wind under my wings And many other magic things. I think it no accident we met And have many meeting still and yet I feel remorse an aching loss I'm jealous of my mind of course. And so is Randy. Winkiewinkie Stinky. Bags123, Glad you enjoyed and your right about Monday Serenity, And to you, thank you dear. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-09-2002 01:04 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour my dearest friend This is incredible writing, again you manage to spin words into threads of light that refract and dance in delicate hues of sunshine within. Your writing shines as no other does. And what a brilliant jewel this is, utterly utterly perfect the rhythm in this is utterly divine, I love it when you write like this. Truly exquisite, the smile I have is big and golden I love your absurd play on theme The twist and spiral of poet dream No other writer can do this Spin wordy magic in poet’s bliss You write the words that speak to me That fills me with poet’s fantasy Like Alice in her wonderland I’m held captive by your poet’s hand Your writing spins threads of delight That sends me spiralling into night A touch of your pen and I’m bound Without so much as a single sound You breathe your poet breath on me And I’m gone where there’s a mystery Until the day that you don’t write I’ll be caught in your poetic light Did you miss me yesterday? Mmmm like a hole in the head, well I missed you, truly I did Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You are really spoiling me. And I did miss you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh this is so very excellent, Sy... I have been trying to write a poem about my shadow for a couple of weeks now...and I just can't seem to get it right... but you have hit the nail right on the head with this one... I love your descriptions It has no substance you can touch It’s just a see thought gray as such. But when I’m sad with what I do It’s always there a second you Oh how I wish I had written this.... You are a genius, Sy... ~ shadowy hugs Lyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, And you are a delight with your reply. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ok, I give... Where do you come up with all of these little jewels...??? Excellent...errrr, did I see the name Stinky? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you for the nice reply and yes JM does call me Stinky. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are my favorite flavor of dapple~ This is just a wonderful write~ All of your work is such a pleasure to read aloud~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Aand you are my favorite |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love it when you merge whimsy and wisdom... for you do it in such delightful ways. *S* Excellent work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, your a super excellent fan. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I was just missing your dappled words Sy, and hope you are busy riding your dragon. |
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