Go (these words are as hard as your eyes)

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Open Poetry #20

Go (these words are as hard as your eyes)

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-06-09 02:00 AM

We beheld beauty
in memory and distance.
Much love to you,
broken past.

The fragile motion of the sea,
eternal heartbeat
pounding the sand.

We behold darkness
crossing the dateline.
How times change.
How growth gives in.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-09-2002 02:05 AM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

1 posted 2002-06-09 02:00 AM

I like the hidden meaning, and the portrayal of love.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-09 02:06 AM

Yr smart!

You figured out what my poem meant before ah did! And yr right. Dark love poem.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-06-09 06:52 AM

that's the way I see it too!

btw, I love the new pic, very sexy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-06-09 07:31 AM

Liked both the title
and the body...
very good...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-06-09 07:59 AM

Hey! Loved this...sure did!
Love the new pic as well!

~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-06-09 09:06 PM

Thanks all, for takin' time to read my angst.

Much appreciated.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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