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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-06-08 01:15 PM


it seems I'm on a roll,
4 wheels beneath my seat
and writing nonsense poetry
I'm doomed to Pete, repeat!

Snippet, Snappets
my feet want to curl up catlike
in sunbeam’s warming glow
they’re chilled, too chilled,
from June’s wintry feel
from heel down to each toe


©June 8, 2002


Oh, no! Oh, no! Whatever shall I do,
someone has stolen all my weeds,
ev’ry one of them is gone!
I love to dream impossibles
a little while after dawn.

The truth of the matter
they’re all quite firmly there,
I can see almost ev’ry one
from this old computer chair.


©June 8, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
TwoHeartsOnePen
Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60
state of determination
1 posted 2002-06-08 03:19 PM


These are delightful!

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-06-08 03:22 PM


VAS,
Simple a delightful read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-08 03:41 PM


How wonderful!
What smiles you give me!
~Hugs~

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2002-06-08 03:41 PM


Thanks, you two!  They were so much fun and silliness to do!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

bags123
Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128

5 posted 2002-06-08 07:11 PM


Are you still complaining about chilly Junes?
Have you got those dishes done yet? LOL
These were great! Very funny.

[This message has been edited by bags123 (06-08-2002 07:12 PM).]

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
6 posted 2002-06-08 07:15 PM


Compared to my serious stuff this is delightful!Bravo


icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
7 posted 2002-06-08 07:23 PM


Ahhh - if your weeds are truly gone (I know - I love to dream too *LOL*) I will pack mine up and send them to keep your flower beds company! I have soooo many of them I'd be most happy to share them. And they are tired of the heat, so if you have a chilly June, I just know they would appreciate it!

Very cute - I enjoyed muchly V.!

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
8 posted 2002-06-08 07:45 PM


Thank you, all, and icequeen...DON'T YOU DARE! I've enough for the whole town here.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

GOlDsparklESS
Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
9 posted 2002-06-09 03:06 PM


hehehe.. cute
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
10 posted 2002-06-09 08:49 PM


Hi there VAS,

You're lacking of weeds Send me that dream, I wanna dream that every day when I see those stinging nettles about my size LOL

Love your little poems, they bring joy

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
11 posted 2002-06-09 09:00 PM



Don't apologize for the Cutes!  Never!

More, please!

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