Open Poetry #20 |
What's the Attraction (repost from Sanctuary) |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tis just a glance a flickering a smile in gleam of eye a sigh so soft it’s often missed unheard by passerby What measure can I take of words for this attraction this list will grow will gain length in poetic distraction Tis not just one thing one moment that holds me to your side but count them? I cannot for surely I have tried |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Sharon....simply lovely. ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, PDV... ~ hugs to a fine poet Lyra |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
It is the small almost imperceptible hooks that snag the heart and capture the soul Lady deVine, thank you for sharing, I enjoyed the read. Peace! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Simply perfect, perfect an' simply. She said burn ... together. |
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