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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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to my niece..enjoy your new abode I see the family spread a product of being wed window views of your parent's block this is my family stock an artificial pond will become a development as boxes are moved in I ask where have I been. sis had kids, they played with doll houses neighbours move in the row as spouses... admire the handiwork on stairs the space of the kitchen fresh scent of hardwood floors a floor mat laid out in alphabet letters for Max your son, to know language better your house carved out from sections once wooded this is my family stock a stone throw from your parent's block. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-08-2002 10:15 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very well written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks for sharing..again welcome to Passions! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a sweet lovely poem, Martin... Theres something special about it...I don't know what it is....maybe that family feeling...anyway.......I really enjoyed it.  ~ hugs from a member of your poet familyLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Lyra, it's wonderful when you see kids become adults and take care of themselves, that was the idea..glad you liked it. |
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