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Around the Water
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Around the Water |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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 Around the Water it is around the water that life begins where creatures without zoological prejudice congregate, humming happily as they feast Even the trees around its border lean toward the water roots drinking their fill ah, how complicit and satisfied G*d must be musing over distorted reflections that mirror the breezes directions and stay pudding-smooth around its emerald edges above it upon it below it and around the Water this is where precious life lives [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (06-08-2002 08:42 PM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Jeff hi there my dear friend how are you I am so far behind with my reading, so I’m glad I get to be one of the first if not the first to say this is quite simply stunning. Your writing is always great, sometimes a diamond drops on these pages of blue and how often that diamond bears the name Jeff as it’s creator. This is exceptional writing my friend really really excellent work. NOW you know why I always look for your work don’t you? Because it is truly exquisite and this one is superb.   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another great write. Enjoyed the image of pudding smoothe. Excellent. ThisDiamond |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Krissy!!!! What are you up to this glorious Saturday afternoon? Good to see that Maaaaaassha gave up come computer time for you. hehehehe It REALLY is good to see your words here again, amiga, and i miss it terribly when you are absent. Thank you Krissy! VVVVM (verry very very very much) and for grins, take a look at the Prose Forum and you will see an example of my story prose form. Kind of a weird story......but you may enjoy it! TS: Hi Diamond Eyes of a poet! this pudding has a few dimples in it, that's for shuuuure! You both are much too kind, and the reviews and good wishes are much appreciated. Thankx, y'all! JkF |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Jeff! And the pic is spectaular as well! So good to see you here! ~Hugs YOU~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Enjoyed both, pictue and poem. Well done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff It is, isn't it...around the water, where life turns and poets go too, for inspiration? Loved this! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ShadowRider~ Lovely, lovely, lovely~ 'Even the trees around its border lean toward the water roots drinking their fill' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Loved it. I love nature. That brings out why I do. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
G*d must be musing over distorted reflections that mirror the breezes directions and stay pudding-smooth around its emerald edges above it upon it below it and around the Water this is where precious life lives this is so very beatiful, Jeff...the picture also.  ~ water creature hugsLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (06-09-2002 12:51 AM).] |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
It never ceases to amaze me how significant water is to the survival of all life, and reminds me of how God's word is always refered to the life-giving water for the spirit of man. So true--when we are immersed in, and drink in the word of God, we grow and find abundant life. Very beautifully done dear!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling heart boy and hanger of the moon OH YES!! This is exceptional writing, utterly utterly brilliant. I sought this out because it is such a wonderfully well constructed piece of fine art. The flow within this simply screams quality. You are so multi talented and darling boy this showcases your talent as only one of your sparkling gems really can. I forgive you for being multi-talented, I forgive you for writing time and again words that ring with wonder, I’d forgive you anything because you write sooooooooo well, Each and every stroke of your pen proclaims your talent out loud. You did pick up I love this utterly utterly didn’t you? Oh good because I do Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Being creatures consisting primarily of good old H20....certainly a fitting place for all of life to be... You painted an awesome picture...thanx.. |
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