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Open Poetry #20

Embedded in Purity

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2002-06-08 02:13 PM

Embedded in Purity

Your smile,
a road map of beauty,
opened up.
Your world,
A decoy from reality
Set apart.
Your Eyes,
Speak of sensuality,
Longing him.
Your house,
Adapted in complexity,
Made for you.
Your voice,
Candid, full of intensity,
Yet so soft.
Your yard,
Embedded in purity,
Sight to see.
Your ears,
Desire to hear destiny.
Walking near.
Your horizon,
Miles from any deity,
Toward true love.
Your Heart,
A gift of integrity,
For everyone.
Your earth,
Caressed in history,
Born to live.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-06-08 02:43 PM

Very nicely done....
Very neat how you composed this poem
within each part..

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

2 posted 2002-06-08 03:09 PM

what a beautiful voice you have!
I love the way this one talks to me.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-08 03:14 PM

Lost Dreamer
Well done, enjoyed the read.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2002-06-08 03:25 PM

wow! cool write, gurl

where ya been?

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

5 posted 2002-06-08 07:21 PM

You know I love this poem and I really mean LOVE this poem!

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

6 posted 2002-06-08 07:40 PM

This reminds me of watching someone grow... it is really nicely done. I enjoyed the read very much!

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2002-06-08 07:42 PM

Hi there! I enjoyed this - and echo Doreen..where ya been missy???

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