Open Poetry #20 |
Butterfly |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Butterfly Living paper wings Tumbling down to earth Stilled by a fragrance [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (06-08-2002 11:00 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I just lve butterflies when they find a flower to happily rest on, they look sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
flying to be free fragile wings of beckoning my heart flutters still Butterflies are meant to be free |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
had to come in love butterflies love your "living paper wings" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Elizabeth! I love Janet's reply too! You two are just too cool! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A touching write, Sy |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh how beautiful, Liz I love butterflies...but then...who doesn't? ~ butterfly hugs Lyra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is what you made me see and I thank you. There is nothing means more to me than |
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LORNA New Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 2johannesburg SOUTH AFRICA |
BUTTERFLY, BUTTERFUL, PLEASE SPREAD YOUR WINGS, DANCE WITH THE FLOWERS AND BIRDS THAT SING. LIKE A SHOOTING STAR, SO BEAUTIFUL, SHALL DIE, PLEASE SPREAD YOUR WINGS, AND FLY FLY FLY....... I LOVED YOUR POETRY SO MUCH I HAD TO CONTRIBUTE THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION!!!!!!! YOU CANT LOSE WAT YOU NEVER HAD!!!! [This message has been edited by LORNA (06-08-2002 06:40 PM).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful Lizzy..possessing a butterfly's heart - this is special.. miss you, huggles K |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great write Liz. Loved it. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Elizabeth You never cease to amaze me with the sheer beauty of your words. This was exceptional. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
oooohhhh what a yummy write this is... you do everything so beautifully. You must be part butterfly, Elizabeth Whenever I read your poetry, I always end up with an "ahhhhhhhhhh" sigh because it is so lovely, just like butterflies. ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Noah, I didn'r know you were a butterfly man. Always enjoy your comments JM. Your resonse is an echo of sorts, very beautiful Vas. THank you so much for your comment Ethome,Thank you,dear Friend, Icequeen Thabk you,, Your message is very kind Lorna, Thak fot rsponding in verse, I Love it!! Severn. I miss you girl!!!!! Hope all is well,Thanks for your remarks on this poem Sy, Thank you, dear master Madame Chipmonk, Butterfies are creatures stat still mystfy. Thank fot your kind words Mysteria Thank you for sending me this beautiful butterfly Munda Thank youm dear |
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