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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Wanting Eyes ~*Grandma Marge*~  She looks at me with wanting eyes full of questioning surprise Listening to the verses sweet that Grandma whispers in repeat~ It's as though she really knows each phrasing thought that I compose For her ears only, Grandma rhymes poetic thoughts at sleepy-bye time~ She stretches, turns and looks at me her wanting eyes saying, "One more please." *Inspiration from an e-mail from Maggie/FlutterWings (I knew that !)  with a sweet comment on Delaney's 'wanting eyes'~ Thank you dear lady~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (05-29-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And what person could turn away from those wanting eyes without giving all of their heart to a precious little darling like Delaney.... You are such a lady and certainly a most wonderful Grandmother... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
oh my... she is completely darling. Who could resist one more ~~ certainly not Grandma, eh? Sweet, sweet, sweet! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww! What an adorable picture "grandma". And, I love the poem, also. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge! This is just too sweet! And it looks as though she is looking right at your mouth as you form the words! Amazing! What a sweetheart! You are so blessed. ~Hugs to you both~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Blessed wanting eyes! Bravo! ThisDiamond |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Margie this is so gorgeous and the pic so sweet, I bet she really does understand every word of Grandma Marge...just a devine write and what wonderful inspiration ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
What a sweet Grandma Marge ! I am sure she's eyeing at an eternity of lovely poems from you. ~mycafe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You are both adorable to me!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Marge~ This is too sweet! I miss those little eyes in the faces that I was once responsible for and loved so dearly. I'm sure that a Grandmother's love is twice the reward that daycare could ever be, but there is nothing like the innocent eyes of a child looking back at yours. This made me miss the days....and keeps them fresh in my mind. Truly it does~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marge! This is so cute and beautiful!! Beautifully written too! I really enjoyed this!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thanks so very much everyone for letting me share my little Delaney Delight ... she REALLY does love the poetry that I whisper to her ... she is the love-light of our hearts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isn't she darling. And she has the best Grandma, too. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What BIG eyes she has Grandmother! She is beautiful Marge!!! I bet she's thinking "gee I've got the bestest grandma in the whole world!" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Do I ever remember those "eyes"...in fact, my twenty two year old and thirteen year old both still use those eyes on me....and I hate to admit it...they always get their "one mores" still today.....sigh, no wonder I'm broke...it's them damn eyes!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How could she not love your poetry? *G* She probably thinks she's the luckiest little girl in the world... for her nursery rhymes are custom written and penned with love! *S* This is great, Marge... what a beauty she is! *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Inspiration is all around us, but especially in the eyes of children...well done, our Marge... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ha! A wonderful piece and a beautiful grandchild  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Those eyes would melt an iceberg. Beautiful |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
I love you Gramma, these eyes do speak ~ I love you more week after week ~ I know my wanting eyes want more ~ Look, see what my heart has in store ~ It beats for you, but you can't see ~ all the love I have deep within me ~ Look deep within these wanting eyes ~ and Gramma, I know your eyes will cry ~ Not sad tears, but tears of joy as you watch me play with all my toys but, I'd rather look within your eyes because, that is where love really lies. See, what those eyes do to me... they get me off on a poetic tangent... One touching poem ~~~ She does have wanting eyes... Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) P.S. It's not flutterbox but, flutterwings... just thought I'd clear that up... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thanks again to everyone .... awwwwww, you are all so sweet~ ***Maggie*** ... oh my ! Another sweet *gift* from you ... and Tee-Hee ! I did know that !  Honest Injun~  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marger*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hee, hee...know this so well...great piece...Grandma! jwesley |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Absolutely gorgeous Marge what a precious gift Hope |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear ~~~*Marge*~~~ I tell you again , she is so lovely your grandschild, "with her surprising eyes. What are you telling me? she said Love Muys |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ain't she the cutiest cutie patootie on the blue pages. What an adorable sweetheart she is, I'm sure she takes after her granny  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart you know she is getting sweeter by the hour, are you sure you can’t sneak her in for the Saturday night? She’d love the poetry round the pool don’t you think? As always darling heart when you write Delaney with your hearts ink you illume the whole forum. Truly delightful writing and I love it I love it utterly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I just want to kiss and hug those beautiful pudgy cheeks. And the wonder in her eyes! Mmmm!!! She is such a dollface and I can't believe how much she's grown. Gosh, she'll be running circles around you and Bill anyday now. Keep whispering those poetic words to her and telling her stories of her heritage. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friends ... someday Delaney will look on these pages and be stunned by the beautiful people her Grandma is blessed to know~ Thank you all so dearly for the kindness you show to me when I just can't help but share 'ANOTHER' Delaney Delight~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Just a precious picture and poem. She also has "wondering" eyes. You can see such curiosity there. Wouldn't it be fun to know what she is thinking? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I just want to HUG that little sweetie, with those great big eyes, Marge.....She is so adorable and she looks so cuddly...and, I bet she is going to be a fine poet, just like her grandma.  ~ hugs for you and DelaneyLyra |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl Hi there I’m so behind with my reading and replying mum has had me working like a Trojan, I do believe I have blisters on my fingertips from all the stuff she’s had me doing. They are though worth the effort so I’ll stop moaning and wait to reap the accolades in September Your writing is incredibly beautiful carrying within it an indefinable quality that shows the worth of the love. We all have our favourite writers, Mum adores your writing as you know, and you know how I feel about it YOU are incredibly talented. Your writing is incredibly descriptive and well presented and when you write with your hearts ink you surely shine. YOU are one of the stars that light the heavens.This is superb writing, and it will stay with me for I’m keeping this special treasure piece of yours.   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
***SweetSweetFriends~ I share every *hug*, every *smooch*, every loving thought you all leave here with my precious granddaughter~ She truly lives up to my nickname for her ... she IS my Delaney Delight~ Thank you all for the loving tenderness you share~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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