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Two Hearts One Voice
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Two Hearts One Voice |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Hold me oh so close And let your feelings show Reveal your inner feelings And let love bloom and grow Surrender your kisses to me Lay your body next to mine Be a slave to your emotions Upon our sweet love we will dine Give in to your passion By the fire's warming glow Fan the flames of your desire Say the words I need to know Come with me to the seaside Where we'll ride the waves of love Touch me beneath the moonlight As we count the stars above In our own special galaxy The stars will now align Beneath this blanket of diamonds Two hearts will now combine Not a single word is spoken For love has left us with no choice Love is all that really matters Two hearts sharing the same voice Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sue, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just love your gorgeous words of love, they always make me smile and twinkle like the stars! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Beautiful and romantic. Well written! I think is lovely! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Pretty... "Come with me to the seaside Where we'll ride the waves of love Touch me beneath the moonlight As we count the stars above In our own special galaxy The stars will now align Beneath this blanket of diamonds Two hearts will now combine Not a single word is spoken For love has left us with no choice Love is all that really matters Two hearts sharing the same voice" Just damn pretty...pretty pretty damn pretty! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sooo romantic Sue. I had my Hon read it and he can't understand why I don't write romantic poems like this. :-) Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
That is the way of love, beautifully done Sue! *S* |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Such a romantic and tenderly beautiful poem about your feelings of love. Thanks for sharing! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Suetang ... I really like this! What a magically romantic picture of love you have painted here ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Delicate ink in your pen~ I LIKE it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sue,this is SO how it should be. Sigh Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl this is absolutely wonderful, the poetic trace of your soul always written in starlight into your heart. Utterly utterly wonderful writing, and yes of course I love it. You know I’m going to say this is utterly utterly gorgeous don’t you. of course you KNOW, you always do, absolutely excellent writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Glad to read you "riding the waves of love". Sounds like the surf is up! Enjoyed this! Shenachie |
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