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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-06-07 11:29 PM


Hold me oh so close
And let your feelings show
Reveal your inner feelings
And let love bloom and grow

Surrender your kisses to me
Lay your body next to mine
Be a slave to your emotions
Upon our sweet love we will dine

Give in to your passion
By the fire's warming glow
Fan the flames of your desire
Say the words I need to know

Come with me to the seaside
Where we'll ride the waves of love
Touch me beneath the moonlight
As we count the stars above

In our own special galaxy
The stars will now align
Beneath this blanket of diamonds
Two hearts will now combine

Not a single word is spoken
For love has left us with no choice
Love is all that really matters
Two hearts sharing the same voice

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-07 11:53 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just love your gorgeous words of love, they always make me smile and twinkle like the stars! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EarthenSoul
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2 posted 2002-06-08 01:14 AM


Beautiful and romantic.  Well written!  I think is lovely!
ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-08 04:30 AM


Pretty...

                                  "Come with me to the seaside
                                 Where we'll ride the waves of love
                                 Touch me beneath the moonlight
                                   As we count the stars above

                                    In our own special galaxy
                                     The stars will now align
                                 Beneath this blanket of diamonds
                                   Two hearts will now combine

                                   Not a single word is spoken
                                 For love has left us with no choice
                                   Love is all that really matters
                                 Two hearts sharing the same voice"

Just damn pretty...pretty pretty damn pretty!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-06-08 09:02 AM


Sooo romantic Sue. I had my Hon read it and he can't understand why I don't write romantic poems like this.  :-)  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Dulcinea
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5 posted 2002-06-08 05:23 PM


That is the way of love, beautifully done Sue! *S*
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6 posted 2002-06-09 11:57 AM


Sue:  Such a romantic and tenderly beautiful poem about your feelings of love. Thanks for sharing!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-06-09 12:17 PM




Hi Suetang ...

I really like this!

What a magically romantic picture of love you have painted here ...




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8 posted 2002-06-09 12:19 PM


SueTang~
Delicate ink in your pen~
I LIKE it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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9 posted 2002-06-09 07:41 PM


Sue,this is SO how it should be.
Sigh
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-06-09 07:51 PM


Sue darling girl this is absolutely wonderful, the poetic trace of your soul always written in starlight into your heart. Utterly utterly wonderful writing, and yes of course I love it. You know I’m going to say this is utterly utterly gorgeous don’t you. of course you KNOW, you always do, absolutely excellent writing

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Bridget Shenachie
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11 posted 2002-06-13 01:03 AM


Glad to read you "riding the waves of love".
Sounds like the surf is up!

Enjoyed this!

Shenachie

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