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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fantasia In a woman’s way she truly feels A little better but surreal When a wink is cast along her way And she nods, as if to say Let me, for you, a woman be By rite of passage, this fantasy Give me your grin, then some trust Wink me again, if you must Her light becomes a truer glow Her step is lighter as if to show I am grace, still desired And yes, good sir, I can light a fire A truer gentleman there cannot be But he who winks her fantasy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yikes! Karilea... You pulling these out of a magic hat tonight?? And THIS one! These thoughts have to be in nearly every woman's head... at some point in her life. *I know they are in mine*  I love this one...and I'm keeping it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, that wink is so nice it's the blatant stares that are creepy but when a man winks, nods and smiles, it makes the day wonderful  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey Karilea, I like this. I wish I could write this good. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I just love how you always cast your magic wand and spell so much more than bunnies from your magic hat, sweet friend, this is a true enchanting piece of love! (big hugggssssss) May true love always give you the magic wink of trust and joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--I know just what you mean! Loved this one! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Excellent, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
catch this my wink we need no extinguisher for flames of desire Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a lady wears a wink and blushes her reply then with quick salvation blames the sun on her refection enjoyed this ms sunshine |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its nice to be appreciated Sunshine...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Give me your grin, then some trust I liked this one very much Karilea. *s M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Sunshine. *S* Now if only I could get a wink and a nod instead of a bug-eyed stare right before he bolts! LOL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful wink poem! But some men wink before they think.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Easy on the eye! Well done, ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, everyone...you always amaze me with the types of responses left...and I'm often giggling at the replies... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, I am borrowing one of 'Deer's to make it a wink.... Such truth in the words of a lady... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Ain't this just the truth?!? Blush! Shenachie |
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