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You're Still My Girl
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You're Still My Girl |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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If I wire you the money- Will you catch a plane, And meet me next week, In Cheyenne? The circuit is different- My luck has all changed... I need you here with me To win. The days we were younger- Now lay far behind... I should have grown up I suppose. But I'm crowding fifty- One thing on my mind... To ride in the Pro rodeos. So please say you'll be there- To give it one chance... I'll ride if you're there In the stands. And after the short go- We'll go to the dance... For you're still my girl I'm your man. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
well I sure hope she'd catch that plane and come to you. I like your style! Don't worry, things have a way of working themselves out. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
"And after the short go-" that line was so well put loved this poem |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Like this format and the rhyme scheme very much! The poems moves so well and delivers so clearly....nice writing! |
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