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EarthenSoul
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0 posted 2002-06-06 07:20 PM


Anger and Rage
Fire... Uncaged
All is Staged
And precisely Gauged
For War to be Waged
And nothing Gained
Nothing remains
But Anger and Rage
The Beast Uncaged

© Copyright 2002 Trisha L. Beaver - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-06 07:30 PM



EarthenSoul - good name, topical poem!  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-06-06 07:34 PM


Trisha, welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post..
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-06-06 07:40 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, this speaks with such intensity, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Welcome to Passions, sweet Trisha, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Trisha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
4 posted 2002-06-06 08:10 PM


your words ring true...
"for war to be waged
and nothing gained"

well done.
hope you enjoy your stay.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-06-06 11:51 PM


Powerful poem...love the impact...

Welcome to Passions...

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