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The View From My Eyes
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The View From My Eyes |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Over the red tiled Spanish rooftop of the house across the street, A bright beachball shot high up in the air, there were no children, no shouts, no explanation Just part of a day in the life of a window... I now know what mescaline is..... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't... but I do. *S* Very powerful images here, dear one... I like it very much. *S* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
like this very much, just beautiful Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed this... ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Toe darling boy oh this is sooooooo good. Truly outstanding, as always, you are such a fine writer and this is very very fine workmanship, it’s lovely to see such a well crafted poem . You do draw a very good picture darling boy Wonderful writing utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll tell ya, Toe, you could take little snapshots like this from your mind, put them into a book and I would be the first one in line to buy. This is your style and you can flavor little ordinary nothings and turn them into small works of art in a way I have seen no one else do...it's something that comes natural and can't be taught in any poetry class. Write on, sir Toe  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this vision made me feel so relaxed, I just love how you take small snapshots of life and make your own gallery of art upon these pages with your words! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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sweetonu New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 9 |
who needs a photograph with poetry like this! super imagery!! sweetonu |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toe~ This IS a wonderful piece of writing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very descriptive,Mr. Toe.... Its nice to know the feeling without having to poison yourself with the drug.  ~ huuuuuggggggs!!!!Lyra |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love your poems that make me laugh or bring a smile to my face, but when you write like this dear Sir....your poetic talent really shines bright. Imagery and language joined to form poetry at its best. BRAVO!!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm back to enjoy again... and to save this in my library for future enjoyment. *S* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've gotta admit - I'm envisioning a work of art myself here... Don't tell Toe, OK Deer?.. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
thanks to all for the kind replies |
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