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vandana
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0 posted 2002-06-07 11:02 AM


I couldn't help falling
In love with you
Everytime
I see your eyes
The deeper
I looked
Into your eyes,
Saying that
Somethings are meant be
Meant to be
Always
Forever
Like a river
slowly surely to the sea
Where tonight
seems so cold
Where all the things
Are meant to be
Where your love can hold
your heart?
Where your love can hold
your heart?
Somethings are meant to be......
Somethings arn't meant
to be
Somethings
sometimes
We our life
are confused
So confused
That rules we make
The keys we take
To open our heart
Somethings are meant to be.......

[This message has been edited by vandana (06-07-2002 11:05 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-07 11:04 AM



Indeed, Vandana, some things Are meant to be...
and some things are meant to be understood by some in ways that simply aren't understood by others...

a good poem, here, a thinker...

ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-07 11:27 AM


Yes my dear Vandana.....Some things are meant to be.
This is an absolutely lovely poem. Thanks for the thoughts!

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3 posted 2002-06-07 11:30 AM


Full of grace an beauty.
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4 posted 2002-06-07 12:21 PM


I couldn't agree more
Your poems are always an enjoyment my friend

Sven
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5 posted 2002-06-07 04:20 PM


you know. . . I like it better this way. . . somethings. . . instead of some things. . .

it's always good to look through your eyes my friend. . .

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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-06-09 04:28 PM


Yes something are meant to be for somethings are impossible to resist...James
ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-06-09 08:51 PM


as man tries to all alter nature he often finds somethings are meant to be.. I like how you repeat those words...nice one vandana!


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8 posted 2002-06-10 04:41 PM


Good use of repetition.  Nice write, Vandana.
Enjoyed!

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