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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the walls open and reveal a place where flight shines and where words sing in languages open to the mind and to the heart where colors reveal in second sight the unseen secrets of themselves in dreams still captured and from nightmares left alone the streams wind from deep within finding the chalice of the soul and, pouring desire into reality, they sculpt new memories onto the page of openness waiting for us to read --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful my friend....just beautiful.... ~Hugs~ *check your email* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ditto Enchantress, Sven... twice, even... *smiles* ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, may we alwyas read through these walls and plaster them with frescoes of happy memories bound to last forever! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Lovem Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
here this sits too far down the page..waiting to be read. You make me sigh as usual, dearest.  Luv this lots and lots! How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love how I can "read" this poem in different ways. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Simply gorgeous... where colors reveal in second sight the unseen secrets of themselves in dreams still captured and from nightmares left alone I especially love the phrase "in dreams still captured". ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very well done, Sir Sven. Sandra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awesome, John, as I can't believe how outstandingly cool you can write. You always have the words! Great one. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome! Beautiful! Well Done! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Enchantress, thank you. . . Tier, three times. . . thanks. . . vandana, always good to know that you enjoy my friend. . . Noah, yes. . . and then, let's build more walls. . . thank you. . . Temptress, thank you. . . you always seem to find . . . Munda, I love how you can do that too. . . thanks. . . icequeen, thank you. . . I've found that you can capture dreams easier when you believe in them. . . Lady Sandra, thank you my dear friend. . . as always. . . Saunni, well. . . I don't always have the words. . . but, I try my friend. . . thank you. . . loner 23, thank you. . . I take it that you liked it?? ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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