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Chunkin' Rocks
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Chunkin' Rocks |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I guess I've thrown A million rocks When I was young I had more time That I never needed So I threw it away. The spinning stone Is a moment thrown The distance tossed Is the moment lost When Toe's alone, He's good at stones |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
He's good at so many things... including writing wonderful, thought-provoking poems. *S* I think we've all tossed a few too many pebbles, sweets... for a while, we feel invincible. *S* Then reality intrudes, we see more years behind us than ahead... and have to deal with the fact that some of those ripples are doozies. *S* Ooops... *G* I yammered so much I forgot to tell you how much I like this... or to volunteer to make Toe less alone! LOL [This message has been edited by suthern (06-06-2002 04:31 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You wrote them words well Toe, he he we must be about the same age then eh???? I remember tossing stones, waisting my time, he he should have saved some time, 'cause I've too little of it now LOL Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If you ever need any more rocks to skip.. Just holler my way...I keep a few in reserve. Seems we all have done the chunkin' rocks thing.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Toe darling boy, you have certainly written this exceedingly well, so you aren’t just good at tossing stones. This is very thought provoking and I love it utterly You know I could never get a stone to skip over water, all the ever did was hit the water and sink into oblivion, much like my writing now come to think of it. This however won’t sink like cream it will rise to the top. Well written darling boy, I love this I utterly utterly love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is so good and I'm guilty! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and you been trying to get your rocks off ever since, from what I understand  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I know this feeling, sweet friend, I too used to skid rocks all the time when I was a boy but was too naive to think of it this way, now it seems to have so much more depth that I would have ever thought! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerfully introspective piece, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My, but you are prolific lately. Cor |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And for that, Corinne, we are most grateful... more, please, Toe... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When I was young I had more time That I never needed So I threw it away. So true....the words of the immortal philospher, Mr.Toe its amazing how much time we throw away when we're young.  ~ philosophical hugsLyra |
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