Open Poetry #20 |
Thoughts from a Bridge |
bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
BELOW From the bridge I watch the river's twilight waters flow Sure destination uncompromised by the creeping timid fog ABOVE Gas demon's light casting shadows on skeleton steel Oblivion's steeds rescuing their precious minutes homeward bound BELOW Velvet mud pushed on silently by omniscient tides skirting ancient isle's undaunted by mans concrete obstacles ABOVE Cruel cables harnessing heaven a cosmic attempt imitating God The river chortles at our finite impudence [This message has been edited by bags123 (06-06-2002 05:30 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words paint vivid pictures, bags. *S* I like this... welcome to Passions! *S* |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed reading, looking forward to more... welcome, ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Great contrast. Look forward to future writes. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like this...very descriptive...easy to see the images you paint with your pen.. Welcome to Passions.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I'm going to like learning from you...Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thank you all for the kind response. Looking forward to checking your respective poetic heads as well. Peace |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
welcome to passions... quite remarkable poetry, distinctive style...made me think, which is always a good thing.. this especially: Velvet mud pushed on silently by omniscient tides skirting ancient isle's undaunted by mans concrete obstacles K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very very interesting first post! I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is so sad but such a powerful debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks...eh...I didn't think it was that good. Hugs and kisses back at you...I guess. |
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