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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-06-06 12:40 PM



I've offered you my love to hold
untitled rhymes, I've plenty of,
kept within the warmth of chest
treasured are these words of love

To never reach your touch it seems
as hours pass and time slips from
the daily needs and comforts of
the loneliness of just someone.

I've stilled the beat and held it for
the moments of my need for you
but time has ways to rhythm crush
and blend me into shades of blue.

And so I pass my time in write
wondering when the real shall be
from morning rise, 'til sun that sets
expressing all, the flow of me.


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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state of mind
1 posted 2002-06-06 12:49 PM


This is so wonderful, I hope this works out through the time and writing.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-06-06 01:07 PM


You are just like that Energizer rabbit.  You keep getting better and better and ....

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-06 03:37 PM


You do that so well.......write all that flows in you!  
This is the blues baby!
You're good!  You ain't makin it up are ya?
I wouldn't want you to still the beat too much cause I like the poetic work.....But hey, I'd rather see you happy!

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4 posted 2002-06-06 07:27 PM


Maureen darling girl yet again you’ve written an absolutely gorgeous and tenderly soft piece. I could feel the soft feather of wishes brushing against your soul. You’ve written absolute perfection here, and I’m spell bound by your ability to write such beauty.

Truly outstanding writing you know I love it utterly utterly love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

EarthenSoul
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5 posted 2002-06-06 07:41 PM


  Beautifully Blue  
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-06-06 08:13 PM


thank  you bernie...sometimes I am  just writing off the top of my head..doesn't really mean much since my mind goes in so many directions at once "s

M

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-06-06 11:35 PM


I....I wish I felt like that bunny *s hey I dressed up as one three yeas ago or so..maybe it was 4...and then I did look better, too *s


e... I am definitely in my blue period...I am happy when I awake each morning for now.
Thanks *s

Marsha...aways I am happy  to see your responses, you who are beginning to know me so well
hugs and thanks
M

EarthenSoul..thank you and welcome *s  

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