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Waiting For |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I've offered you my love to hold untitled rhymes, I've plenty of, kept within the warmth of chest treasured are these words of love To never reach your touch it seems as hours pass and time slips from the daily needs and comforts of the loneliness of just someone. I've stilled the beat and held it for the moments of my need for you but time has ways to rhythm crush and blend me into shades of blue. And so I pass my time in write wondering when the real shall be from morning rise, 'til sun that sets expressing all, the flow of me. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-06-2002 12:41 PM).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is so wonderful, I hope this works out through the time and writing.  Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are just like that Energizer rabbit. You keep getting better and better and .... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You do that so well.......write all that flows in you! This is the blues baby! You're good! You ain't makin it up are ya? I wouldn't want you to still the beat too much cause I like the poetic work.....But hey, I'd rather see you happy! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl yet again you’ve written an absolutely gorgeous and tenderly soft piece. I could feel the soft feather of wishes brushing against your soul. You’ve written absolute perfection here, and I’m spell bound by your ability to write such beauty. Truly outstanding writing you know I love it utterly utterly love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
 Beautifully Blue  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you bernie...sometimes I am just writing off the top of my head..doesn't really mean much since my mind goes in so many directions at once "s M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I....I wish I felt like that bunny *s hey I dressed up as one three yeas ago or so..maybe it was 4...and then I did look better, too *s e... I am definitely in my blue period...I am happy when I awake each morning for now. Thanks *s Marsha...aways I am happy to see your responses, you who are beginning to know me so well hugs and thanks M EarthenSoul..thank you and welcome *s [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-06-2002 11:36 PM).] |
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