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Iambe Watches
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Iambe Watches |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Iambe Watches She joined our picnic while he simmered my summer sun when he found blades of grass to tickle my fancy then more my soft slap turned to tug and grimace turned tickle, then grinning lightly "do it again" a whispered request, "do it again, so I might punish you into forgetting where you left the blade” he complied, and plied, winding ways and bending curves taking us both to places long unexplored as grander canyon dreams even Rod could not imagine became his and mine Iambe winked, blinked, her mouth an O for what she had missed as well... the only ants I found on the pick nicked ground where those under my skin where he had kissed my summer warm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Deca bet Rod would grin and slap a wink at ya this was somewhere special cool |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Enjoyed your gentle rendering of 'slap and tickle'. Blush! Shenachie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deca! My my lady..I know someone who is going to really enjoy this one besides me! Oooh how you made me smile today. Just when I needed it most! ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame Big smile, enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Deca You got another ear to ear right here! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'm sure Ron will be pleased to see such a wonderful work about his poetic protagonist. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . but, who's watching Iambe?? wonderful Decaflame. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wunnerful flow lady... this works, and it works well...muchly enjoyed..  K |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excuse me while I go get the hose to cool off myself and my monitor screen....Seems we both got a little warm... Thank You.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 She keeps leaving Oklahoma. Sheesh. |
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