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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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on the cliffside in our place town where the villa is our castle and the beach is sugar sand that doesn't cling to skin you are barefoot on marble floors you wear the veiling of whispers and my eyes, nothing more except the perhaps of a smile I strum guitar sambas you sway your responce in skin rhythm you wear my eyes as hands there and find the gauze too confining the guitar is quiet now our music is our breathing we enlace in lover's pose fitting our togethers together I love the scent of you when your woman makes water on her skin and when her eyes are like glass with desire when you promise me your soul if I will just take you again over the edge of our wall where you can see the ocean below and feel heaven whispering behind ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now there's a story in glass eyes...good morning...well done... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
morning ms sunshine.. thank you for stopping by may I offer you a sip of chai and a escort along the gypsy tides thanks lady |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger You paint with a broad palette knife and strong colors. But I enjoy the result. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
You do indeed paint the images so that the reader may draw from the results what they would... as usual, I enjoyed the read and the thoughts. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and the beach is sugar sand that doesn't cling to skin you are barefoot on marble floors you wear the veiling of whispers and my eyes, nothing more except the perhaps of a smile I strum guitar sambas you sway your responce in skin rhythm you wear my eyes as hands there and find the gauze too confining =================================== I love the scent of you when your woman makes water on her skin and when her eyes are like glass with desire ================================== mmm mmm mmm .... DS...you strum the reader the same way you do that guitar. there are so many cool lines and images and analogies in this sultry beauty....all I can do is re-read and tan in the warm of your words  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, thanks for your comments much appreciated guy Cpat, arrigoto for the review and re's Janet Marie, will imagine the tan of you and the eyes that smile.. thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
To leave the reader with smiling eyes and trembling hands so early in the sun is a talent indeed.. Enjoyed, is not the word I am searching for. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchanting 1, thank you for your words and thoughts this early morning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love the way your words are stirring my steamy coffee this morning haa.. ~Victoria |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS It would be fun to play in sugar sand. What a vision you create. It's not Newport, must be your fertile imagination's word place. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, very warm poem, I can only imagine the happiness of a woman who has such written to her. Sandra |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
our music is our breathing we enlace in lover's pose fitting our togethers together" *sigh* I could play in the sugar sand of your words all day....more more! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so very nice. Romance can be intoxicating. Nan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like a shangrila to me! Loved the marble floors and the way the whispers carry down the hallways. Nice place DS~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Victoria, thank you sexy lady, I appreciate you. Martie..kind of a place in mexico and laguna blended..thank you babe...enjoy your reads Catmoon, you would look good there...that dark hair and the pale sand..thanks for coming by Smittykitty...kick off you shoes..let those toes wriggle in the warm..thank you Pilgrimage, thank you for the visit Blues..thank you sweet lady..you must have been to such a place..at least a dozen time.. malibu perhaps... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont mind me...Im just a moth flying in the pretty blue flame lol drop by and see us sometime groovy guy!! |
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