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Iambe's Point of View
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Iambe's Point of View |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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Posted with permission and encouragement from Ron (Cpat Hair). I see Sol's old truck Bouncing my way It coughs when he turns The ignition Kind of like Sol When I ask him to dance I keep my hands busy On Bob's old Ford Knowing that it's Something else entirely I'd like to get my hands on I watch Sol from the Corner of my eye Leaning down in the cab I can see where the line Of his hair now ends I drop my wrench And the clamber causes Sol to look my way His sad eyes meet mine And as the dust On the road settles So does the dust On my heart It seems we will always dance this tune. Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
You seem to be capturing Iambe's essence... keep it up! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sitting here with frank admiration, K. I tried to do this, and just couldn't. Hmm...you've got me wanting to try again. Great job with this. It was good to hear Iambe's point of view. (I'm sure Ron enjoyed it too.) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you do wonders smitty kitty can see you there with the grease on your nose wish you were into harley's (grin) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Krista darling girl this is awesome and so beautifully written. And you know it is true you write and I’m stunned you make it look easy when I know it’s not. You are truly an awesome writer do I love this? YOU know I do it’s superb. Utterly utterly wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! Wait 'til Ron sees this. He will be proud as can be  Well done, SK |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh Krista, this is beautiful, sweet friend, Ron always writes the most beautiful poems on lambe and now you too have the spirit of this wonderful character in you! (kiss on cheek) I know Ron is absolutely going to love this, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I drop my wrench And the clamber causes Sol to look my way His sad eyes meet mine And as the dust On the road settles So does the dust On my heart It seems we will always dance this tune. ======================= very very cool....yes...I too have become a huge fan of Rons Iambe writes...and this captures with a bittersweet delight the chemistry that he creates between his characters. I enjoyed this muchly Krista-girlie...well done. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Elan~ You should check out Open Poetry #14 to see the real goods. Cpat Hair is the one that writes the Iambe series, I just borrowed the inspiration for a bit =) Thank you for stopping in and encouraging! K~ Awww Thank you sweet poetess. And I say, go for it! I certainly enjoyed myself diving into Iambe for awhile =)DS~ Who says I'm not?  Mushy~ There you go mushing up the place again! Thank you sweet lady, you always bring me smiles and warm stuff! *hugs* Interloper~ I emailed it to him before posting it as I didn't want to step on any toes! But he was nothing but encouraging and kind =) He is a wonderful teacher, whether he tries to be or not! Thank you so much for the wow SweetNoah~ A gazillion smiling thanks to you! I wish I could bottle the bubbling kindness in your replies...I'd never have a bad day again! Hugs to all of you! Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
JM~ Hey, you snuck in on me while I was replying I'll never even come close to creating the essence of the characters like he does, but it was so fun to try! It was definitely an eye-opening experience...now I know I'm not limited to my own experiences! Thank you for the fly by, it's always great to read your words. *hugs* Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This is a hard thing to do, and you did it well, SK. |
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