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sweetonu New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 9 |
I learned my heart in specifics; how your body takes shape across the bed, and how I fit into it even the slightest symptom of your breath teaches me calm. I hold the earliest sun in my hands, and worry that time as an option is never enough. I could not think to love you more than this. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetOnU~ Welcome to Passions family of poets and friends~ This is truly a wonderful entry piece~ You're going to love it here and we'll enjoy reading more from you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! What a warm entrance! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very very beautiful thoughts in this first post. I'm sure you are going to love it here! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I loved this piece and I look forward to more of your work  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Now this is true romance... welcome, ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a nice little poetic cuddle...warm and cosy write...I enjoyed! |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
that was marvelous. i don't have time to elaborate. beautiful opening piece though! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That is a very well done piece of poetry... Welcome Passions...Hope you enjoy yourself.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet frien,d, awwwww, your words flow so lovingly here, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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sweetonu New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 9 |
Wow, I never expected such a grand welcome as this!...you are all so beautifully kind and generous. Thank you all equally for your comments, I am so happy you were pleased. I do look forward to posting more in this forum. It already feels homey and a pleasing place to visit. Thank you again!! sweetonu |
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