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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Within conundrum of me a whirling ache begs unity emotions fleck confetti heart glitter ball in bounce of wall-- an ending--searching-- for a start-- I am tangled task of yarn. Fingers tap in crossed boredom... I am tangled-- conundrum... [This message has been edited by serenity (06-06-2002 04:34 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I used to live in one... finally got a house last year sure enjoy the extra space (huh?) enjoyed it ms |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
an ending searching for a start....the eternal conundrum.... i dig it. boyo... you're up late...  "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The good solid reasoning from your pen will solve your searching for a start conundrum I'm sure.......If not then I'll have to.....but you got it in hand really you just think you don't. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
task of hand... I know this... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
emotions fleck confetti heart glitter ball in bounce of wall-- an ending--searching-- for a start-- I am tangled task of yarn. =============================== only you could come up with those metaphors and images and in one poetically perfect verse...capture the true of you with such unique depth. We already know the answers...its the questions that get us every time. Remember in school....tests were easier when they we multiple choice.   When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I always thought that you were a contradiction wrapped in an enigma. . . excellent. . .flowing today. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey...thanks...still untangling yarn, but thanks fer letting me pass with me butt unscathed! sometimes I just write because I can't not, yanno? yep, ya'll know...and I appreciate much the graciousness of ya'll allowing me to muddy the waters a bit... hugs all...  to forum! |
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