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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-06 03:41 AM


Within conundrum
of me
a whirling ache
begs unity
emotions fleck
confetti heart
glitter ball
in bounce of wall--
an ending--searching--
for a start--
I am tangled
task of yarn.

Fingers tap
in crossed boredom...

I am tangled--
conundrum...

[This message has been edited by serenity (06-06-2002 04:34 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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1 posted 2002-06-06 05:33 AM


I used to live in one...
finally got a house last year
sure enjoy the extra space

(huh?) enjoyed it ms

MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
2 posted 2002-06-06 06:33 AM


an ending searching for a start....the eternal conundrum....
i dig it.

boyo... you're up late...

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-06-06 06:50 AM


The good solid reasoning from your pen will solve your searching for a start conundrum I'm sure.......If not then I'll have to.....but you got it in hand really you just think you don't.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-06-06 06:56 AM



task of hand...
I know this...

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2002-06-06 07:27 AM


emotions fleck
confetti heart
glitter ball
in bounce of wall--
an ending--searching--
for a start--
I am tangled
task of yarn.

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only you could come up with those metaphors and images and in one poetically perfect verse...capture the true of you with such unique depth.

We already know the answers...its the questions that get us every time.
Remember in school....tests were easier when they we multiple choice.

When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations
When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence

JFK

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6 posted 2002-06-06 04:33 PM


I always thought that you were a contradiction wrapped in an enigma. . .

excellent. . .flowing today. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-06-07 07:16 AM


hey...thanks...still untangling yarn, but thanks fer letting me pass with me butt unscathed!

sometimes I just write because I can't not, yanno? yep, ya'll know...and I appreciate much the graciousness of ya'll allowing me to muddy the waters a bit...

hugs all... to forum!

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