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Serpentine Miles
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Serpentine Miles |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Delicate upon the path in pointed motion Vigilant upon the task in single notion Every beaded fabric by my hand and sweat Every tailor made, through all the weather met As long as ever there has been to hold immortal As far as ever there will be in visions portal Delicate upon my breath the moment here and now Delicate upon my heart of every turn upon to bow Finely traced these footsteps that have followed me Finely chaste before my faith and all that I can see Sweeping in with voice so high to call ahead my way Serpentine these miles gone by to peek a brand new day Copyright Kkh 4/11/02 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting form... and some very nice use of words to add to the flow and feel of each pair of lines.. I admit I may not understand this completely.. but it was an interesting read and ponder... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond And this is a diamond, excellent write, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Your title brought me into the gentle weaving of this piece~ Lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think this needs a bit more read...you have woven your thoughts intricately, but not so mysteriously as to allow a reader, given time, to gain the meaning within...  BTTT |
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