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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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hubcap moon thrown off a god car while racing a star to meet some dawn for a tequila sunrise streetlight babies wiggle their beam toes watch old cars grow fog fur play peekaboo through holes in oak leaf fences night on her way home in indigo with diamonds too much to drink her clouds exposed offers from vulgar wind to finish the undressing she lays down on ocean sheets presses black mountains under her chin and considers wind's stormy offer ©Dark (from og's eyes) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark Stranger, I had an offer like that from the wind once - it swept me off my feet and blew me away. Fabulous writing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
DS~ Out standing but your words always are, and where is the OG any way??  Lauren~ Step through the |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Kethry, Thank you..and I imagine that naughty wind would chase you a bit..wink Greeneyes, thank you Lauren, he is out there not sure just where, so watch out |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I have seen nights like this....sort of....  the way you describe it, the fog, the ocean....yes, I love this |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
There are naughty winds ones that tease full skirts tickle ears ...the ones that come from your lips naughty winds, indeed... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA, thank you babe...yes a cal moon for sure Soleil, such a blessing this wind..thank you for the read and reply |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The wind can run away with the night and your descriptive way of writing lets me see the view in a different light. Thanks. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I can picture the night closing in.. enveloping us... as the wind picks up...with a pick up line no less.... I enjoyed this... read it over a few times.... had to savour the mood you created here.... As one chased by the wind and chasen by it.... I know his temptations... and his tenderness too..... Beautiful write, Dark. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~again, love the way you write. Naughty wind loves to play with my hair. I have known nights like this...yes. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Martie, thank you for your walk along.. this is the neighborhood we see sometiems? Sherry, bless your woman for the sweet comment, thank you for being there. Enchanting one..thank you for your eyes and smile ...you are always welcome to share in the view |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love the imagery you create, sweet friend, I saw a cadillac cruising across space reading this, looking for the good times in the light beyond! (sigh) This is grrovy, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Imagery - unleashed... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I missed this and thanks to the ever wonderful lady of sun..I get to see it..Thanks Kari..and this is sooo stunning.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, thanks for the bumperoo..and for being you. Regina, thanks babe...pleased that you enjoyed it |
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