Lost in the Wasteland of Hate

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Open Poetry #20

Lost in the Wasteland of Hate

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2002-06-05 03:37 PM

Words of anger
Split from wrath
Thrown like daggers
In love's path

Stunted love
Out of bounds
Chased by fury
On sinking grounds

Forever ill-fated
By cruelty and hate
Love is left stranded
At the desert's gate

Hopeful tears
Wept in vain
Dried up like flowers
Pressed in pain
Dedicated to my sis Barbara and her now ex-husband...they were only married for 3 weeks.

When life gives you a rainy day...

Play in the puddles!!!

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (06-05-2002 04:08 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-06-05 03:48 PM

An excellent poem of the tribulations of
love, when two are not ready for that
last step...

A title? Hmmmmm... Parting Vows...

Just a thought...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-06-05 03:49 PM

I feel so sorry for her. I hope she makes it through all of this OK
She's very fortunate to have such an understanding sister.

You might want to call it
"Love Left Stranded"
or
"Disaster Over The Threshold"

Something like that.......nice concerned and supportive write.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2002-06-05 03:54 PM

Till living do us part

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-05 04:02 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lavada, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to her, I know how hard it must feel! (sad sigh) My thoughts are with you and your sister Barbara, sweet friend, I think a good title would be "Lost in the Wasteland" God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavada, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-05-2002 04:02 PM).]

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

5 posted 2002-06-05 04:05 PM

Hello all..Thanks for your replies! I really appreciate them. As for my sister, she's doing fine. She lives in Missouri now, and she is engaged again.

I've been gone a while, but will try to be around more often.

~*~SCG~*~

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