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suthern
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0 posted 2002-06-04 02:06 PM


And the colors of her spill across the page
As she writes out her longings, confronts her rage.
Her words an emotional kaleidoscope
For she stumbles through darkness and still seeks hope.
Yellow sunshine she beams on those she calls “friend”
Glasses with rose tints sometimes let her pretend
That no human heart is so completely black
Love can’t fill the void and supply any lack.
And that reality leaves her feeling blue -
Some endings aren’t happy whatever you do.
At times she stays silent, rehearing words said
Those days find her eyes weary, bleak and streaked red.
But very little keeps her down a long while
She gathers her strength, repositions her smile
And plays doting grandma to a little boy
Who’s her greatest delight and her dearest joy.
There are treasured dreams she’s had to pack away
As the featured stars deserted her life’s play
Her attire should be purple; she’s been a queen
In situations that would have turned me green
With jealousy and charred my soul into dust
Someone threw away her love, bloodied her trust.
But a strong faith lit the very darkest night
And her heart shimmers gold, she will be all right.
A glint of silver may be gracing her hair
But her legs still stop traffic and make men stare
She’ll act sly and sassy, but if they should wink
She’s just as likely to blush furious pink
Her fellow one and only just wants to say
I hope our jellybeans has a great birthday!

And... unlike SOME people I could name... *bratty grin* I got the date right! LOL

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1 posted 2002-06-04 02:12 PM



Happy Birthday,
and such a WONDERFUL
poem you have received!

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2 posted 2002-06-04 02:15 PM


What a wonderful Happy Birthday card

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-06-04 02:15 PM


ah lady.....
I just ran from building to building
to escape the rain
got assignments finished while the
clock was ticking
forgot my lunch, and my money
and now I sit here after reading this
crying....
it might not be a picture perfect life
but at the very least...its not boring *g*
and with you as my friend
I am enriched beyond measure
I love you lady

and the poem...its no wonder I ask for your advise so often....you know me better than I know myself...you remember kindly all the things I have found a way to whitewash, you even find a way to make me and all my weaknesses sound likeable *smile*

thank you lady for your love and for this gift

and yeppers...the day is right...but it wasn't half as much a surprise as mine to you was...*preening*...you ain't never gonna one up me on that one...and sides...you might just have another couple...lol...I love surprises *bg*

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4 posted 2002-06-04 02:19 PM


and it took me so long to type my reply that interloper and sunshine beat me to the punch...thank you all for your warm wishes
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5 posted 2002-06-04 02:39 PM


jb: Those AREN'T weaknesses... they're niches that hold me up when I need to lean. *S* There isn't a day that goes by that I don't thank God for Toe... and Toe for you... or something like that. *G*

And ROFLMAO @ you... you're right. *G* Sending birthday wishes ON someone's birthday is so traditional and predictable. *G* But just think... if I tried to write for each of Sybil's personas, I'd need a poem for every day??? LOL Love you... and hope you're celebrating you in spite of rain and hunger. *G*

Sunshine & Interloper: The card/poem isn't as special as the lady... but I thank you so much! *S*

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6 posted 2002-06-04 04:10 PM


LOL. . .

I just have to enjoy this one. . . it's wonderful my friend. . .

and Happy Birthday JB. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2002-06-04 04:12 PM


I've got pictures
She sure is cute,
Dressed so nice
In her birthday suit!!!

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8 posted 2002-06-04 04:16 PM


Ahhh, this is SO sweet of you suthern!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JELLYBEANS!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

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9 posted 2002-06-04 05:15 PM


Sven and Enchantress: I'm so glad you enjoyed. *S* Thank you!

Toe: So you're looking at peekshures, hunh??? LOL How well I remember the two of you giving them something to talk about. *G* Thanks for stopping by, sweets... both your one and onlys appreciate it. *S*

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10 posted 2002-06-04 05:17 PM


well my son bought me lunch, by accident, he didn't realize it is my bday...but the visit and the burger were nice *smile*
and lol@your giggles, glad to return the favor  
oh...and just so you know...its not sybil's birthday...we have decided that each of us get to pic our own...well cept me...I am stuck with that traditional day you were born thing.....
rofg

toe...you shush bout any pics...lol sure is good to see you   sigh...makes me want for old thrivin' times

sven..thank you so much for stopping by and for the hb  

enchantress, yep suthern is a prize...am lucky to have her...thank you

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (06-04-2002 05:19 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-06-04 09:09 PM



JB, you aren't the only one lucky to have suthern as a friend...

HB again!

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12 posted 2002-06-04 10:29 PM


Happy Birthday, lady !
What a lovely, lovely *gift of friendship* ...

SuthernGal ... it's just beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2002-06-05 03:55 PM


Sunshine & Marge: How I'd love to hug you both. *S* Thank you so much!
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