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Dee
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Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-05 07:13 AM


Goodbye.

Golden haired angel
so full of love
in your innocence
you share it,
with no thought
of rejection.
Smile warm
and arms wide,
you allow me to hold you.
Every soft kiss from you
embedded in my memory.
It breaks my heart
to walk away,
leaving you
precious child.


For my sweet little Callim, I love you and miss you heaps.

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

© Copyright 2002 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2002-06-05 07:22 AM


Golden haired angel
so full of love
in your innocence
you share it,
with no thought
of rejection.
====================
Every soft kiss from you
embedded in my memory.
====================

Hi girliegirl...so very good to see your name here...this is a beautiful sincere write Dee...I know writing it and the reasons behind it are so hard,
But I also know you are strong.
Im also sure you've left many a memory for this special little person as well.
heart-hugs to you
we miss you, but understand.
mothyme

When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations
When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence

JFK

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2 posted 2002-06-05 07:22 AM


Dee..

This is very touching...I very much know
this feeling...only mine has dark hair
and dark eyes... Her name is Nikki...

HUGS..

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-06-05 09:43 AM


Dee, this is so sad and very touching.
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4 posted 2002-06-05 09:48 AM


OhDee~
Soooooo tender~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-06-05 02:17 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Dee, this is soooooo heartbreaking, sweet friend, my heart cries out to you and I know deep down Callie misses you too and loves you so much and no matter what happens, her love will always guide you and nothing can ever change that! (sad sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dee, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dee
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Queensland, Australia
6 posted 2002-06-05 07:34 PM


Thank you all. I am glad you still remember me Just had to drop this one in to remind you all I am still around.
I am so sorry I haven't been here much lately but personal problems need to be sorted out first. I am looking forward to when I can be back like I used to be.

Love to you all,
Dee xx

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

jwesley
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7 posted 2002-06-05 09:21 PM


Ah, so touchingly, longingly beatuiful, Dee.  Hearts to you my friend...I understand far more than I'll ever tell.

jwesley

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