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whisper-kissed--goodnight...
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whisper-kissed--goodnight... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Last words I think tonight are prayered hands enclosing you-- I long to dream my life as sleep-- yearn of tears, a new day's dew. He kissed me wet he said goodnight caressed me with his eyes... He kissed me--yet I'm bird in flight caged within his sky. Now I'm in a fevered spin. I saved his love upon my lips-- I close my eyes and savor kiss-- a saint--in rape by shroud of sin. There shall be no peace this night-- my skin is urging me to Hell... but now I'll close my eyes to sleep-- for only, in my dreams, he dwells. "Let us meet in dream tonight." He whisper-kissed me mesmerized. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Boy I wish I had your dreams. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Can I whisper kiss you good night? Without the whisper! Great work Celeste! Love the peak of emotion and then the return to the peace of acceptance..........You're good girl! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'll have to try this method...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whewwwww...with dreams like these, who would ever want to wake up and do anything.... Nicely done... Oh yeah..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He kissed me--yet I'm bird in flight caged within his sky. ========================== I close my eyes and savor kiss-- a saint--in rape by shroud of sin. There shall be no peace this night-- my skin is urging me to Hell... but now I'll close my eyes to sleep-- for only, in my dreams, he dwells. "Let us meet in dream tonight." He whisper-kissed me mesmerized. ===================================== *shaking me mothy head* "I'm bird in flight caged within his sky. damn baby.....damn........... *sigh* (yktiktyk) (yes...you know) and? ya know us and our "in sync" thing we do? well....we just did it again.... last night after i shut this thing down... I was playing with my "miniture" magnetic poetry(tiny icebox on keychain)Mark gave it to me a ways back... ya open the door and a light comes on  ...all the tiny magnetic words are in the "veggie drawer" and stick to the door of the mini-fridge. anywaaaaaaaaaay  ........I play this little game with them....I dump them out and try and make one line from the first 10 I draw out... last night...the words made... "I love you in my dreams" its sitting here by the computer this morn where i left it...and now i find this poem. *shaking head again* So...did the light just go on ROFL ... we are good LOL .... forgive me for rambling on your thread... (so far to go for so little) lmao why ask why, right?   When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence JFK [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-05-2002 07:58 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this serenity. Whisper kissed...mmm, sounds SO good! Beautiful write. ~Morning Hugs~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this. . . well. . . let's just say that it says things that only hearts hear. . . wonderful. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now I can't wait until I ... zzzzzzzzzzzzz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
my dreams? smiling...when they are good, they are VERY VERY good, but when they're bad? the angels shudder... and cracking up in glee at my twin!!! Looks like we've still "got it" eh? Love you lady, in dreams AND awake... Thanks all, once again for the generosity! |
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