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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-06-03 10:15 AM

You are here,
Looking at me
Smiling upon my face,
This was the place
When we fisrt met
You were there
to say
Looking
All the way
To the song
That playing
Now I know,
Deep
Within my heart
My life Is complete
You have showed me
The way
To look within my heart
Now when my life Is coplete,
The songs ,
The roses,
Candles
everthing
To the momemt
When my life Is complete,
I have found you
And
Now I know
my heart says
When my life Is complete,
Don't want anything but you
You are my life
That complete my life
That complete my heart,
When my life Is complete

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-03 10:16 AM

Sounds of complete
are wonderful. Very
nice, Vandana...very very nice...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-06-03 10:23 AM

This is wonderful Vandana

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-03 08:38 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! May your heart always echo with that song your love crooned to you in the place and day you met and may your life always be complete, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-06-04 05:41 AM

Nothing like finding that person or place where you feel complete...James

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-06-04 07:26 AM

You've captured the feeling of love and completeness beautifully Vandana, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-06-04 04:15 PM

never stop writing like this my friend. . .

you have the gift. . . excellent. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-06-04 04:19 PM

And you are very fortunate to have someone like that to write so nicely about!
Loyal words of love.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-06-05 08:53 AM

Vandana...NOTHING beats the feeling of
having all that one wants..particularly
from a relationship with one we love..

Enjoyed...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2002-06-05 09:08 AM

It's nice to when you find that special person. This is a beauitiful poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-06-05 09:11 AM

VanDana~
Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2002-06-05 09:26 PM

Wonderful to read the words of those who are WHOLE within their life. Thanks for letting us see the way you feel, my friend. Hugs>

jwesley

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