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kinson
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0 posted 2002-06-04 10:10 PM


Remember that night so clearly now
My first evening with you
Your eyes reflecting that silver screen
So full of love
So blue
From that night I never thought
That we would end so fast
But I should have known
From that first kiss
That we would never last
Love is such a fragil thing
Soe quick to wilt and die
Love is beauty
But love is lost
Not meant for you and I
I'm sorry your so full of pain
But I know that pain well
I've shed my tears for never was
I'm with you in this hell


© Copyright 2002 Chris - All Rights Reserved
kinson
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1 posted 2002-06-04 10:18 PM


Can i say hell?  I'm sorry if I cant. I'm really bad with rules, I forget they are there. Didnt mean to offend anyone, dont kick me off please. If you dont I'll give you candy, magic candy.  It will make you fly.
kinson
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2 posted 2002-06-04 10:19 PM


Can i say hell?  I'm sorry if I cant. I'm really bad with rules, I forget they are there. Didnt mean to offend anyone, dont kick me off please. If you dont I'll give you candy, magic candy.  It will make you fly.
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3 posted 2002-06-05 12:52 PM


It's okay, and this is VERY well done. I feel it.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-06-05 01:37 AM


What is gone is never forgotten, our feelings just change and move on.
This was really nice...I mean hell, you spoke of the missing and knowing the feelings so well.  

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