Open Poetry #20 |
Looking back |
kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
Remember that night so clearly now My first evening with you Your eyes reflecting that silver screen So full of love So blue From that night I never thought That we would end so fast But I should have known From that first kiss That we would never last Love is such a fragil thing Soe quick to wilt and die Love is beauty But love is lost Not meant for you and I I'm sorry your so full of pain But I know that pain well I've shed my tears for never was I'm with you in this hell |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
Can i say hell? I'm sorry if I cant. I'm really bad with rules, I forget they are there. Didnt mean to offend anyone, dont kick me off please. If you dont I'll give you candy, magic candy. It will make you fly. |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
Can i say hell? I'm sorry if I cant. I'm really bad with rules, I forget they are there. Didnt mean to offend anyone, dont kick me off please. If you dont I'll give you candy, magic candy. It will make you fly. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It's okay, and this is VERY well done. I feel it. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What is gone is never forgotten, our feelings just change and move on. This was really nice...I mean hell, you spoke of the missing and knowing the feelings so well. |
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