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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Cast forward into breeze shine I see the particles of you trying to collect into solid I think out loud and smile wide You make me shimmer in feel warm solitude even when you are walking away or sending me vibes through your eye sway and I see what you see because we are close So close that my pain is your pain and your pleasure is my pleasure Nothing is glass but the stare |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Regina! Ok, ok, so I am visibly impressed, I am throwing all of my pads away and turning OFF the computer... you win, hands down... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, Shoot! Why didn't you tell me this was a contest, I would have folded long ago too. You give Passion its meaning and more. Thanks babe.  BTW, have I told you lately how much I like the way your mind works? Well...I do. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Cast forward into breeze shine I see the particles of you trying to collect into solid I think out loud and smile wide You make me shimmer in feel warm solitude even when you are walking away or sending me vibes through your eye sway and I see what you see because we are close ================================ I do so love the view thru your eyes... talk about poetic perspective.... "Cast forward into breeze shine" how cool is that line and image!! waaaay cool  so good to find you here today girlie... thanks for the room with a view of you.  When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful freeverse...I really enjoyed this...you have a great command of imagery I've noticed..  K |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When pleasure and pain are shared and become one it is then we are understood completely. I love the thought and I am happy someone special is there for you! Beautiful writing as always Regina~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bowing most humbly to your poetic prowess. Mag. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Regina, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you always make the glass seem so full with your words and reflect more colors than any prism can reflect! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I agree with Larry. I can't even afford to ante in this game |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely written with insight! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"nothing is glass but the stare" have you been looking into the same glass that I have Reg?? excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sunshine: Hey! You better turn the puter back ON and draw a great big smiley on that paper pad cause that's what you bring! No losers here! WE are poets. And you are one great lady! Larry: Have I told you lately that you are just WONDERFUL to me? Wink* at you! No contest. I refuse to compete with anyone who owns a 5.0! Jealous HUGS! Janet: Why you gotta be so awesome? I just love it when you read me! THANKS you~ Severn: Thank you for that. I really do write what I see..sometimes..it's not that pretty. Appreciate you. Blues: Exactly..being there. that is the key. Thank you so much lovely lady. Magnus: Be careful..I might pounce on you when you're not looking! hehe..You are too kind. Noah: Hey darlin'! I just love how you see me! Makes me try harder to project the beauty you inspire. love and hugs! Interloper: Oh yes you can. You have more in your pen hand than I'll ever have up my sleeve. Wink* Hug you! ethome: I appreciate that sentiment more than you know. It's important I've learned. Thank you! Sven: Only if you're happy my poet friend. And this I hope reflects the truth..(smile hugs) Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my glass is your glass do you dare step close and wear my eyes enjoyed it ms reg |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This, my friend, along with your picture formed a whole, beautiful package. Touched my heart it did...not the first of yours I've enjoyed, but 'tis the one I like the most...thus far. I especially like ... "nothing in glass but the stare..: Wow. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (06-05-2002 08:57 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, *BUMP* to the front. |
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