Hands Of A Lover's Vine (Inspired)

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Open Poetry #20

Hands Of A Lover's Vine (Inspired)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-04 03:37 PM

This gift of hand, a treasure’s touch
Soft tendrils sleek, once taking such
To hold once light, to leave a kiss
to grasp at night, in mome’ of bliss

From one a spark, electric fire
to one to feel, flame of desire
In reach of tips so warm, so soft
This gift of hand from lover’s loft

This love of hand in love for life
of one to stand in time of strife
a lasting grasp of dreamer’s flame
One hand as two tis not a game

In touches of most tender face
Soft lines of love in lover’s trace
A journey long to reach the quest
a hand on heart, in beat of chest

When kisses take to souls the clasp
and moments come to shortness gasp
One touch will bring to sleep the eyes
as echoes call and voices cry.

As whisper’s snow falls
on the melting of soft ears
memories are heard

[This message has been edited by Magnus (06-04-2002 03:45 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-04 03:47 PM

Yes, you were inspired
very well...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-06-04 04:04 PM

This is such a lovely melody. Love can be so perfect.
Sandra

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-06-04 04:06 PM

inspired indeed Sir. . .

well done. . .

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-04 04:08 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I love how you stayed in free verse then you went to a senryu at the end! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the tranquil feel of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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