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Just In Time
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Just In Time |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Just In Time I'm working on a higher me that God will surely love I want to walk every piece of earth with an honest pace I long to ride every tide that the ocean brings to me I am ready to witness eternal life written on natures face... Oh, just look at how I can open my eyes And, see a clearer brighter light I'm on a path to better know you and me And, to love endlessly on into the night... So, you're just in time to see me fly When before I couldn't leave the ground For these wings will lead me to everlasting peace That my internal " me " has finally found... You're just in time to see me move in ways That yesterday I just didn't take the chance I'm taking in the rhythm today that I failed to feel before So, you are just in time, my friends, to watch me dance... I have never heard notes that simply just captured my heart When before I just never took the time to hear I rushed through life living my past with my head held low But, you're just in time to see heartache quickly disappear... I just know there's miles and miles of untouched land That waits to be used in whatever happiness can bring For each single foot print made will break in it's heavenly song So, you are just in time to hear me sing... For the sunset finds me still willing to anxiously move on And, take in that ever gentle evening tune Swaying softly with it's lullaby playing just for me You are just in time to see me hold the moon... The dawn still finds me pleasant when night is done So, graciously I reach so I can kiss the sun You're just in time to view eternal energy awhile So, you're just in time to witness my lifetime smile... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 YOU GO, GIRL! I LOVE this!!! WOW! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"For the sunset finds me still willing to anxiously move on And, take in that ever gentle evening tune Swaying softly with it's lullaby playing just for me You are just in time to see me hold the moon..."   YAY!!! Oh Saunni, this is such a beautifully optimistic upbeat poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT! And we are all so happy you'ver found true hope and joy to hold onto, for I know He has many special suprises in store for all our hearts, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Passing Shadow, thanks for taking the time to read this. It means a lot. That little dancing baby was so cute! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, thank you also for reading this. You always have the nicest things to say. Bless your heart! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Softly said...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You know there's a lot of heart breaking story poems submitted here and so many excellently crafted and I appreciate reading them. But I also like it when there's a piece like this that embraces the marvelous gift of life with wonderous positive words. Exceptional Saunni! [This message has been edited by ethome (06-04-2002 04:02 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
fly higher my friend. . . fly higher. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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