Open Poetry #20 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Over you pull right to the edge of me straight line cutting side of fringe slipping now you drive me over "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...FANTASTIC!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very interesting write. I am taking this a couple of ways. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! I can't decide if this is a upbeat or downbeat poem, it, like Interloper said, could be taken different ways, there is a deep perspective in these words! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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