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Open Poetry #20

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-04 03:14 PM

Over

you pull
right to
the edge
of me
straight line
cutting side
of fringe
slipping now
you drive
me over

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-06-04 03:18 PM

...FANTASTIC!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-06-04 03:21 PM

Very interesting write.
I am taking this a couple of ways.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-04 04:17 PM

BRAVO!!! I can't decide if this is a upbeat or downbeat poem, it, like Interloper said, could be taken different ways, there is a deep perspective in these words! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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