Open Poetry #20 |
don't let the Sharks get to you |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't let the Sharks get to you What do you do when the woman you love grows weary of you? She slams the door in your face. You realize she no longer desires you in this place. She indicates you must cooperate. Citing it would be useless to resist. For in her eyes you no longer exist. Just like the Titanic you are going down. Not enough lifeboats and sharks abound. At this exact moment what do you do? Swim for the lifeboat. You can make it through. Whatever you do do not let the sharks get to you. They will tear you to pieces and spit you out when they're through. Don't let the Sharks get to you. JamesLee June03 2002 |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Ouch! I live near the beach, so this poem has very literal meaning to me! This was a very flowing read. Good job! ~Sydney McLean |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Definitely what happens when a relation ends badly! Wear shark repellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh James, I hope everything is okay with you and Jin. ~Hugs sweetie~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this sound sos very sad, sweet friend, I hope this feeling is not in relation to your own with Jin, sweet friend, you deserve the greates thappiness always and may you always find yourself leaping with the dolphins in your dreams! (sigh) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
No, don't let the sharks get you. There are more fish in the sea More shells on the beach. More women that want and need a good man. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
For as many sharks as there are out there James there's many many more good women.....So don't you let the sharks get you ....just be patient and swim with a mermaid! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the idea of finding a mermaid instead of the shark. Hang in there, with the rest of us, almost going under.. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The teeth are sharp and bite is deep An angel's harp sings love to keep Keep the fish that bite at bay cause your love..is here to stay... hang in there JM... |
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