don't let the Sharks get to you

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-04 06:21 AM

Don't let the
Sharks
get to you

What do you do when the woman
you love grows weary of you?
She slams the door in your face.
You realize she no longer
desires you in this place.
She indicates you must cooperate.
Citing it would be useless to resist.
For in her eyes you no longer exist.
Just like the Titanic
you are going down.
Not enough lifeboats
and sharks abound.
At this exact moment
what do you do?
Swim for the lifeboat.
You can make it through.
Whatever you do
do not let the sharks
get to you.
They will tear
you to pieces
and spit you out
when they're through.
Don't let the Sharks
get to you.

JamesLee
June03
2002

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

1 posted 2002-06-04 07:02 AM

Ouch! I live near the beach, so this poem has very literal meaning to me!

This was a very flowing read. Good job!

~Sydney McLean

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-06-04 09:10 AM

Definitely what happens when a relation ends badly! Wear shark repellent!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-04 09:13 AM

Gosh James, I hope everything is okay
with you and Jin.
~Hugs sweetie~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-04 10:16 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this sound sos very sad, sweet friend, I hope this feeling is not in relation to your own with Jin, sweet friend, you deserve the greates thappiness always and may you always find yourself leaping with the dolphins in your dreams! (sigh) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-06-04 11:05 AM

No, don't let the sharks get you. There are more fish in the sea

More shells on the beach.
More women that want and need a good man.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2002-06-04 11:11 AM

For as many sharks as there are out there James there's many many more good women.....So don't you let the sharks get you ....just be patient and swim with a mermaid!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-06-04 09:09 PM

I like the idea of finding a mermaid instead of the shark.
Hang in there, with the rest of us, almost going under..
Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-06-04 09:40 PM

The teeth are sharp and bite is deep
An angel's harp sings love to keep

Keep the fish that bite at bay
cause your love..is here to stay...

hang in there JM...

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