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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-06-03 08:51 PM


I've reached five thousand once or twice
in other names I've often penned.
It's not the number reached that counts
instead it is the words that blend

inspiring me to bleed my thoughts
on pages blue or softened white,
as ink runs freely from my mind
what once was bound, I now can write.

The burden lifts, emotions bared
the stress of life unwinds its weave
loosened now, I'm free to fly
and break the hold of "disbelieve".

I verse to you and rhyme a bit
creating words, combined to share
wondering if I get across
my inner thoughts, my outerwear.

Words have taken on a life
I sing-song rhythms and rhyme for you.
It's not the number that counts for me
but friendships made on poets blue.

~~Thank you all *s~~

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2002-06-03 08:58 PM


CONGRATULATIONS MAUREEN ON YOUR 5001 POSTS!!
Here's to many many more!
You grace these pages of blue beautifully!
~Hugs, Nancy~

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2 posted 2002-06-03 09:07 PM


Maureen darling girl again this is sooooooooo incredibly beautiful. You know I love this don’t you. Utterly utterly perfect poetry, you never cease to amaze me with your skill. Exquisite writing darling girl utterly utterly exquisite and you know I love it.

Congratulations on 5000


I know you’re way past 5000 really, and as you say it’s the friends you’ve made on these pages darling heart. You are a really excellent writer and I love this one

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-06-03 11:36 PM



"once or twice"...hey...

Congrats on this...yet another marker, even if under a different name...

isn't Passions fun?

SmartChick
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4 posted 2002-06-04 12:04 PM


Congradulations, Maureen!
passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-06-04 01:08 AM


no...thank YOU
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6 posted 2002-06-04 01:39 AM


Yes, 'tis the words and not the numbers that attract and hold my attention. Well done, Maureen!
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-06-04 10:38 AM


Maureen, you have given us far more than we have given you
Write on ... for all of us

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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8 posted 2002-06-04 10:41 AM


Maureen:

Yes, you have and do...

Congratulations, to you!!

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9 posted 2002-06-04 10:50 AM




YAY!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Maureen, we're all soooooooo proud of you, sweet friend, congratulations on 5000+! (kiss on cheek) You are a wonderful friend to us all and you are a big reason Passions is such a magical and delightful place! (sigh) Congratulations, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-06-04 04:20 PM


mmmmm!!!  

wonderful M. . . just wonderful. . .

congrats. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-06-04 05:19 PM


Nicely said...James
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12 posted 2002-06-04 09:03 PM


You said this so well, Maureen. And congrats for the many wonderful poems and replies we have all enjoyed.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-06-04 09:20 PM


Congrats on 5000!! Here's to another 5000!

A broken heart may hurt me, but a broken heart won't kill me.

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2002-06-04 09:24 PM


Congratulations on a wonderful achievement.
Indeed, it is the words that count not the quantity of them!!

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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15 posted 2002-06-04 09:25 PM


M...

You have graced us with so many of your
beautiful lines of verse...

Thank You for all of them...and may we
once again see another 5000 upon the
pages blue...

Gemini
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16 posted 2002-06-04 09:30 PM


Very, very lovely write, and also congratulations on 5001+ !
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