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kinson
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0 posted 2002-06-03 03:10 PM


Rachel never ever wanted
To be caught up in all of her lies
She’s lost without a cause or meaning
Lost without a friend to here her cry
You put all of your confidence in a world that doesn’t want to see the light
What has your fighting gotten you
Put your confidence in me tonight

They’re fake, They’re plastic and you know it
Their problems, they are none of you’re your concern
They don’t know what they’re doing to you
And they will never know enough to learn
You kill yourself for their amusement
Your broken cause you never learned to bend
And if you find yourself in pieces
I’ll put you back together in the end

You never really had it all
But always had enough for just today
You never really had it all
Cause the love you have you always through away

© Copyright 2002 Chris - All Rights Reserved
Neala
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1 posted 2002-06-03 10:23 PM


Wow! Chris I am left me quite speachless. I liked it.
-Neala

kinson
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2 posted 2002-06-03 10:33 PM


I'm sorry you liked it. I'm sorry it made you sad.
Neala
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3 posted 2002-06-04 02:03 PM


I am not sad!
-Neala

kinson
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4 posted 2002-06-04 09:41 PM


yes you are, i can see right through you, you cant keep things from me, you should know by now
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