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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I drank the screams of your drowning from your lady lips I pant breathed I wound your skin with my leather and bound your edges with my silk I punished your sin with my praying eyes and undid your done with reckless fingers I waited for your morning night moments and your secret slip knot love I was your master, I wore your sting you were percussion in my quiet halls I made your quiet loud softly and your soothed place sore sided You invited me to stay in your dreams ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You invited me to stay in your dreams -- would you liked that engraved, and presented on a silver tray?  or shall I just have that tattooed?  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Someone's bound to come along and say "whachoo been doing, looking in my dreams..." I am sure someone shall do just that... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene... silver is sexy, but I do love tattoos..thanks lady sunshine, good morning lady, sorry the dream was there and no one was around so I just peeked in for a bit...thanks babe for the wave words |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark, you are welcome to stay inside my dreams as long as you like. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
All in all, a most visual display of poetry in motion... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I drank the screams of your drowning from your lady lips I pant breathed I wound your skin with my leather and bound your edges with my silk I punished your sin with my praying eyes and undid your done with reckless fingers I waited for your morning night moments and your secret slip knot love ======================================= WHEW!!! have mercy ... I need some of these "morning night moments" in my dreams *L* "undid your done with reckless fingers" oh man...yeah...undone is a real good word.  yowzers...where's my raspberry tea  When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Enchantress, thank you ms for your doorway to dream places. Elan, ms you are a sweet morning whisper, thank you so much janet marie, and you drink raspberry tea too, thanks saxy one for your touches |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Sounds like a sweet prison that one would not want to untie. Hugs across the valley! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie and hugs back across the valley to you...thank you for the eyes and the waves, you bless me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you always fasten those knots and find a place of eternal joy in her dreams and she will always find peace in you! (sigh) This is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Love down to earth plain language. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend for your read and review sy, thaks sir for the comments, they are always appreciated |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
she lay on the floor then like a button undone by reckless fingers, his kiss tattooed on her neck, tatami mat's sweet smell imbedded in her skin. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bamboo straw strikes water skin she whispers yukkuri isoide kudasai, yukkuri arrigoto indigosan |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
arrigato, dono dark- kangai, bonnou kujiku shouki Indigosan |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
arrigato, dono dark- kangai, bonnou kujiku shouki Indigosan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
domo arrigoto menyu o misete kudasai (slow smile and bow) |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Darlin' Just don't untie this one..really nice knot..really nice. Sincerely, Reg |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Let's keep you on top for good measure DS~ You tie a slippery knot all right! But all things come undone eventually, oh master of the rope! LOL~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
reg....will wear gloves...can't untie anything with them on, thanks hon bluezy, don't call me master...just call me often..grin thanks babe |
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