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kellinjar
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since 2002-05-19
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0 posted 2002-06-05 02:09 AM


you hurt me dear, you hurt me deep
I wish naught but to sit and weep
for love lost, for love forsaken
from this nightmare, I wish to awaken
lost in deed, lost in thought
my heart in my chest, is caught
between beats, between pain
to vie for your love, what gain
could be made, could be had
crushed and defeated, I am sad
dead to the world, dead to you
empty inside, what am I to do

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Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

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Gaia
1 posted 2002-06-05 02:54 AM


Keep writing it out, whatever you do. This is a well written ache and hurt poem.

kellinjar
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada
2 posted 2002-06-05 10:47 AM


Thanx, I shall, but I somehow doubt that I will ever be set free.

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Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

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