Open Poetry #20 |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
you hurt me dear, you hurt me deep I wish naught but to sit and weep for love lost, for love forsaken from this nightmare, I wish to awaken lost in deed, lost in thought my heart in my chest, is caught between beats, between pain to vie for your love, what gain could be made, could be had crushed and defeated, I am sad dead to the world, dead to you empty inside, what am I to do -- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keep writing it out, whatever you do. This is a well written ache and hurt poem. |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
Thanx, I shall, but I somehow doubt that I will ever be set free. -- |
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