Open Poetry #20 |
Voices |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
From my slumber I awoke, To unseen voices as they spoke, Softly calling out my name, Knowing not from whence they came. Peering through the dark and gloom, Shadowed void of empty room, Seeking, searching, no one's there, Cold and lifeless lays the air. No more the voices beckon me, Silence reigns, I cannot see, No visions lay within my sight, For I fail to see the night. Voices calling out my name, Never knowing whence they came. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shhh....we're calling, lucky that you're listening...shhhh |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Tim I really liked this and could relate so well to your words. Strange things happen in the still of the night. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sometimes I would awake to a call from someone in my dreams..can identify here:hats off: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Tim, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I believe the night can always bring such mysterious gifts, you say them so well here! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice flow and meter to this piece and good writing! |
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