Open Poetry #20 |
What If?... |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
What If? What if all loves started like the one for you and me Would they cherish the love they had found, would it like us set them free If they had to endure the distance, only seeing each other there and here Would they feel the pain we sometimes witness, calmed only by flowing tears What if all people had the beginning like you and I did from the start Would they keep their vows and promises, really meaning them from the heart Everyday you and I become stronger, even though we can't see each other face to face Would they instead let time slip them by, losing their mind and state of grace What if all lovers had to face such obstacles and such heart rendering pain Would they still fight for what they know is right, or give into the rushing rain Sunshine can be seen in your smile, as it shines also through your eyes I know no matter how hard our road gets, to you I could never say good-bye You are the very magic to my day, you are the piece that makes me complete I know that the angels were watching down upon us the fateful day we met They guide us with their love, in our will to be together No matter what we go through...you and I are meant to be forever I wonder sometimes late at night what if all couples had the same path as me and you Would they face the struggles or would they give into their souls being painted in shades of blue It doesn't really matter...these are just things I wonder late at night As I wait to bask in the glory of your loving light Hours are now ticking by, and once more we'll be together again As I count down the days till I can see you my most precious lover and closest friend I can't wait to hold you tight, as we make sweet love, then float in the afterglow I use to wonder how you and I would handle all we go through, now I know....(we just love one another) "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (06-03-2002 11:14 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such beautiful writing, Amy. I think all loves are different....and the same. Same love, same problems, same struggles. Some just handle it better than others.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is of course utterly utterly excellent. YES it is, and don’t argue you have such an amazing ability to write of the heart and soul. It’s as if you can actually etch into the heart of the reader. Utterly utterly perfect writing. It is an absolutely beautiful example of your incredible skill. I love it utterly Wonderful writing and so beautifully penned from a poetic angels pen dipped in poets thought’s ink. You do know I love this utterly utterly Darling heart love simply is you have written your heart perfectly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What if all people had the beginning like you and I did from the start Would they keep their vows and promises, really meaning them from the heart Wonderful words... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I can't wait to hold you tight, as we make sweet love, then float in the afterglow I use to wonder how you and I would handle all we go through, now I know....(we just love one another)" (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe destiny is what brings lovers together, for He has a plan for us all and you and your love are destined to share a life of joy together! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amy, well done and very thought provoking! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aim, this is touching. "If" we all had what you have then yep the distance wouldn't be seen. Another great write here! Love it! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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