Open Poetry #20 |
. . . amnesiophobia . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I ignore the fear amnesiophobia I shall give my love unafraid that I'll forget to give you my love freely Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-03-2002 10:57 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Convincing you are Poeticized words so grand Perchance you forget I will gently take your hand reminding you - love is two~ *Monday HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Who is the lucky lady? This is touhing, Bob, I like lots. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow...this reads like a crystal, that I turned over and over in my hand. Seeing different facets in different light. I loved the title, it caught my eye, me of notorious bad memory...wonderful! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ I am so afraid to forget how much I love help me remember Sandra ~ Why, I wrote this for you among others. serenity ~ Thanks from a jewel like you is much appreciated Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you are amazing at these poems! I must take pointers from you because mine are not nearly as good. (hugs) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper~ Spoke words from my bashful heart~ Told him of my love. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Love, be not afraid I am here to re-affirm Commitment of hearts cannot be torn asunder As long as one remembers~ Fire of the desire burning brightly in my heart fueled by love's light in embered glow from your eyes Touch this moment, love~ I will lay the fire in surrounding love of you Catching your sweet sighs We will blaze eternally together ... always~ I like what you do to my Monday mind~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
RosePetal ~ I can't find a key to point with Nancy Lee ~ Beautiful, darlin', just beautiful Marge ~ You leave me speechless with your talent Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-03-2002 01:34 PM).] |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Great play with words. I like!!! INclan |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You leave loving touches very, very well indeed... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Gosh..very pretty..and I had to think to get around your thought, a good thing! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
INclan ~ Thanks for stopping by for the very first time Soleil Noir ~ Once I got around typing your name I forgot what I was going to say Touche' Martie ~ I hope that's a good thing Thanx for the read. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-03-2002 04:39 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
suppress all your fears once having the touch of you unforgettable |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Helen ~ a river runs through love flowing in a torrent current carries me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
to it I say flow water that is wide and deep floating as I sink |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Helen ~ sink into my arms lift your chin to offer lips tasting your sweetness Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
heart beat played again soothe me softest lullaby the music of you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
never one second will I ever ignore you to love forever (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, I believe we all have a right to forget things but love is the only thing we should never ever take for granted! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well said...very well said.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So many times now, I've given my love away. It always comes back. Thank you for inspiring me, right on the spot! It's a moment in time, and the time is now. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
short, mind-bending, and full of sentiment. i dig it. great title. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
forgetting to fear that you'll forget...that's unforgettable |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thank you all VERY much. Uh ... er ... Michael, would you say that again, please Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title captured my attention and I'm glad it did. *S* I very much liked both your poem and the responses. *S* |
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