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When You Rain
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When You Rain |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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When You Rain Logic should tell me you no longer exist, at least not within my orbit; and I do still recall a gray morning when you pushed off in a rowboat, away from our private bay, with wind-whipped hair and hurt eyes. Still, I stand on the dock’s end when clouds are a certain shape and hue and the rain falls horizontally; all elements merging, deja vu. © 2002 CM Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (06-03-2002 11:21 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
much appreciated...the imagery that is. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
everyday i am reminded of what i lost, this speaks alot of what i feel. :-( There's a peace inside us all |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I would have been on the harley and the pipes would have messed up your hair and I wouldn't have heard you screaming those naughty things after me (grin) enjoy the slices you share ms Cor |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, ecrivan and baerlon. Dark one - ahh, but you aren't from the past, are you? Cor |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Corinne, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, for my heart goes out to all who experience losses! (sigh) This is heartachingly beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
your words are as soft as a loud rower, m'lady.....this is exceptional  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do enjoy deja vu writes... you didja best... |
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Cirrus Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 55 |
This I like, very much. enjoyed |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
all over. . . you know, I love the way that your mind works. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Been there...done that....know the feelings of this.. Beautifully expressed Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ 'I do still recall a gray morning when you pushed off in a rowboat, away from our private bay, with wind-whipped hair and hurt eyes. Still, I stand on the dock’s end when clouds are a certain shape and hue and the rain falls horizontally; all elements merging, deja vu.' You puddled me with a remember of my own~ Thank you~ This is a gentle rain~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Noah, 'Deer, Sunshine, Cirrus, Sven (like the way your's works too), Magnus and Marge! Cor |
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