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Aphrodite
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Aphrodite Of whom once more I dream and write My mist of day and fog of night That whispers in each little breeze? And daily gives my heart a squeeze. She strays above the clouds of white And stays no net that I can write She wonders in a gray insist Yet will not stay the lift of mist A butterfly of daunting pour Aura borealis awe Syrupy roving fingertips Whispering hot sensuous lips. Lifting me unstable orb Beyond a dream I can absorb. Transients my spirits day Takes my evenings breath away. Aphrodite Goddess above Have mercy on undying love. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Merci... Granted... indeed... that you would write of whom we adore is what passion is about, and for I love your muse... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such is the poetic pull of one as charming as she... Well done Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine,   Magnus, Thank you my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!! Loved my morning read from you Sy! Very nicely penned. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Good morning love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She strays above the clouds of white And stays no net that I can write She wonders in a gray insist Yet will not stay the lift of mist A butterfly of daunting pour Aura borealis awe Syrupy roving fingertips Whispering hot sensuous lips. Lifting me unstable orb Beyond a dream I can absorb. Transients my spirits day Takes my evenings breath away. Aphrodite Goddess above Have mercy on undying love. ================================== "And stays no net that I can write" "Lifting me unstable orb" Could those lines be ANY cooler? methinks not.  Thy muse is born of cadenced kiss inspires in thy pen verses of bliss romantic recall in rhymed reminisce so you know I would be remiss ... if I did not shout ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis. *winkiewinkie*   the artwork is titled "At Aphrodites Cradle"  Cant stand up for fallin apart Cant see through this veil across my heart, over you- Youll always be the one. You were the first, youll be the last [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-02-2002 11:03 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You write with wings! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Absolutely goddess inspired poem. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Sy...another classy poem from your pen....good work my friend! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, Aphrodite is my favorite goddess in all of Greek mythology and your wonderful words spellbind such beauty of her here! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine puon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis. WWRS Martie, ethome, Thank you friend. And thank you Noah. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is truly stunning writing. Always your words flow with hearts sighs, your voice floats through the starry skies like angels breath. And this not just soft whispers on the edge of night but it’s purely beautiful I truly believe this is one of your best utterly utterly perfect You did pick up my subtle nuance of affection there didn’t you? I love this utterly Absolutely excellent work you never disappoint me Seymour, I know I'm going to be entranced by your wonderful writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, As I with your wonderful replies. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
She strays above the clouds of white And stays no net that I can write She wonders in a gray insist Yet will not stay the lift of mist Oh what a wonderful muse...and what a wonderful poem, Sy... ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Poetic back. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Perfection Hugs |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Excellent poem, I have read poem that are of a similar nature, but none of them caught my attention and kept it like yours. You are a truly talented writer my friend, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your talent is growing, Mr. Sy....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ruth, A hug from you is perfection. powerofthysword Very flattering I thank you. Mike, Your home, see you soon. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Way to go, again, Sy Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Interloper |
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