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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the haze really hasn't cleared yet it still seems as though it's hanging in the air that surrounds me and I'm still groping around for time is time a haze that can't be measured by watches? spoken in numbers of AM and PM that really can't be told with any sort of accuracy but that need to be felt with the wave of a hand? why do we grope for time? time isn't something that can be held (not even with a digital watch) we, as beings of time can be held, but not by arms of movement only by the hands of seconds held until the moment has passed and until we have passed as well and when we have passed from second to minute from minute to hour those hands let us go into the arms of eternity ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
No need for clocks or time in eternity. Wonderfully written Oh GR9 Voice of the Northland  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven .... My hat comes off to anyone who will tackle time. It may or may not be "the stream we go a fishin in", but it's good to inquire now and then. Thanks for sharing. Bob |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very interesting write of a word which seems to control us, dictate what we do, often how fast we go, and so much more.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Sven, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too believe the best way to approiach time is not logically but rather just going about things our own way so we are not pushing upon time and rather it is our cushion while we enjoy lifes gifts! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your wisdom always lights your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
and when we have passed from second to minute from minute to hour those hands let us go into the arms of eternity --------------------------------------------- Love this Sven!! Wonderful piece of writing with a superb ending. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
wise and brilliant write. "held by the hands of seconds" i like that. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah,one of my favorite things to ruminate about. Nice write, Sven. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all. . . time's been on my mind lately. . . I don't know why. . . but, please enjoy the ride. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But there are moments when time seems to stand still and we are captured in the standing... to remember forever. *S* I like this very much, Sven. *S* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Time... still the ONLY thing that I admittedly bow down to...  enjoyed this John... *hugs* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah yes, the age old question of measuring time. Wonderful. Cor |
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