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walker
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0 posted 2002-06-02 11:04 AM



Somehow
if I can whispher
I love you
we would make it through
the night
No ghost would hunt us
We would be realized
And the once thought
eradicated love
will resurface with new force
in the memory lost
It would breathe its
strongest breath
when our skins touch
Somehow
if I could kiss your lips
you would find
that no one else
can love you like this
that love does exist
in the beating of two hearts
like this...
bursting with passion
giving life and happiness
to an unforgiving world
where love sometimes learns to hate

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-02 11:10 AM



Walker...it's been awhile...

good read, this...

Saunni
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2 posted 2002-06-02 11:36 AM


Walker, it's awesome, this write! I love it alot.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-02 11:40 AM


Well I hope you can find a way to get those feelings across because they are so  deeply expressed here in your writing.  Sensual passionate write!
Duncan
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4 posted 2002-06-02 12:49 PM


Somehow
if I could kiss your lips
you would find
that no one else
can love you like this

Exactly!  Good to see ya, again, walker.
  

Desperate for changing
Starving for truth
Closer where I started
Chasing after you

Lifehouse

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5 posted 2002-06-02 09:56 PM




(smiles) Oh Walker, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have missed you sooooooo much, I am so happy to see your lovely words again! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely and sprouting with smiles, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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