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Flight Of Fawn, Fleet Of Deer... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Were you where when I was away Will you be, returning and stay Or...will you fly, sail, soar in see Free of the mome’, sightless of me. Wisps of the wind's cavorting sighs Sparkle of dew of the vine’s eyes Roll of the fields in grainy hues Laugh of the mind, dreamy reviews Billowing clouds tower on blue Air of angels singing true Echoes of loving lasting hear flight of the fawn, fleetest of deer Will you be, return and not go Calm of the morn, white of the snow Shall I turn the covers now warm Calm of the morn, in softness arm Lace the light of Heaven's in you Light the face of Angel's review [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-02-2002 10:15 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, does this ever like me! This is wonderful Magnus...and now that I'm a little more dry-eyed, I can take it straight into the heart of me... this, Sir, is a Keeper... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
magnus, You just keep getting beter and better. Well done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry What they both said, and more! This one left me without words.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Magnus this is just a poetic pleasure for the reader! Good work! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A beautiful write, Magnus... one of your best by far... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, wonderful imagery. You paint your words well..gentle smile..nice read as always |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry..in all honesty...this is by far THE BEST you have ever penned! So tender, beautiful and straight from your heart... brought tears to my eyes.. Amazing talent you have poet sir. ~June Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) I think this is by far one of your best yet, you always have such fabulous poetic magic up your sleeve and originality! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I’m almost speechless with utter awe you have no idea how this rocked me to my soul. THIS is exceptional, your writing is always superb but this is something truly awesome. While I’m waiting to get my breath back I’ll send you a dazzling smile and a breathy kiss. xx just so you know I utterly utterly love this Wisps of the wind's cavorting sighs Sparkle of dew of the vine’s eyes Roll of the fields in grainy hues Laugh of the mind, dreamy reviews Billowing clouds tower on blue Air of angels singing true Echoes of loving lasting hear flight of the fawn, fleetest of deer The whole poem is incredible in it’s perfect construction form and language usage, but these particular lines make my soul weep for joy, they are gorgeous. IWIHWT and how much I know I never could, you are truly the master of this style of wonder, thank you for writing this. It’s utterly utterly perfect You do know I love this don’t you? I thought you probably did. THIS IS A KEEPER and I'm keeping it, written on my heart and whispered by my soul   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fawning Fleetly...ThisDiamond One of your most special writes Poet. Standing Ovation! |
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